Chapter 1: awwww this is so sweet i swear i have diabetes now ><

Chapter 1: Very Sweet!

Chapter 1: Your sense of romance is just lovely. Jiyong being all cute and helping Youngbae overcome his worries so they can have a moment for themselves is my favorite thing. Thank you!!

Chapter 1: The fic is filled with lots of love and balls of sunshine. It made me feel warm and fuzzy. Definitely a very good read. Thank you for this authornim.♥

Chapter 1: ohmygod, this is great asdfghjjll!! we want moooooorrrreeee

Chapter 1: Its sweet with a hint of sad. One of my favorite styles of writing.

Chapter 1: -con- tend to well, not ignore, but kind of play this problem down and focus more on the relationship itself. That is actually something I would critisize myself for but you, you are a brave writer who also shows that the world is not full of tolerant people. Love you for that! :-) Oh and don't even get me started on the last scene! Oh GOD! GOD! I was dead when Jiyong suddenly pulled Youngbae for a kiss but when the latter lifted him in the air and when you described how Jiyong smiled and all - I was done. I am still done! I squealed inwardly the whole time and I think I even re-read those parts because they were so agdfghzj *-* Your romantic moment are the best, seriously! Mine are always so cheesy but yours are to die for, really! You somehow manage to make it so cute and fluffy (with a tang of passion ;) ) without making people cringe. That is one of your greatest strengths imo, you credibility! Your language, I think you know that I am a fan of the way you express yourself :-D And as always, you ended the whole thing more than decently with Bae's: “Thank you for making us walk home.” I think he is definitely right when he says that Jiyong can make him do anything but hey! His ideas turn out to be good in the end! Haha ^-^

What else can I say? It is a very, very nice one-shot that I enjoyed to the fullest! I would LOVE to read more of the one-shots you have announced & ofc I am looking forward to your update for "Let's Make This Last Year Count", I miss that story! *-* Thank you for sharing this with us, t-oresama <3 !

P.S I have a fun fact for you: One day before you uploaded this, I have published a one-shot as well haha! :D We are in synch! But that's not even all: My story does also contain 'cold weather' and a 'walk outside, hand in hand' and the joy of having 'privacy' :O What a coincidence haha! :D Oh and please don't get me wrong, I am not trying to advertise my story, just wanted to tell you about this because I found it funny! Haha ^^

Chapter 1: AAWW! GAAH! AAH! I am sorry for the lack of proper words to express myself right now but this is SO sweet and romantic, my heart is about to burst, I think! T.T Where can I start? First, your concept: It's wonderful! I love the image you have created in my head by describing the scenery: cold weather, dark sky, snowfall, a lonely district in Seoul and then Jiyong and Youngbae, hand in hand, enjoying their little privacy. It's absolutely perfect because it instantly creates super a romantic atmosphere! I am a fan of cold weather (not so much the summer type), and that only added to me approving the fact that you have written a little "winter" story! (though it is supposed to be spring, which is also quite interesting!) Then, there is the way you have portrayed Jiyong and Youngbae. I see that you have chosen to depict them traditionally, just how you and I like it keke ^^ I found it adorable how Jiyong tried so eagerly to prove Youngbae that he was not drunk! "I’m a completely functional member of society.” -> I especially liked this sentence, it made me laugh :D For a moment, you know, it was as if Youngbae was the grouchy adult and Jiyong was the little energetic kid, that was so amusing! It is always easy to imagine Jiyong as the adventurous type whereas the role of the calm and serious boyfriend is played by Youngbae. However, I also liked how the latter's composure crumbled a bit the moment Jiyong asked him to "smell his breath", it was so innocent and yet Youngbae got obviously flustered and I seriously died a little there! Oh, and I have to point out another sentence that I found really brilliant: "Nobody to stare at us because it’s us, or it’s… us." I like the ambiguity of the word 'us' here. You know, I have noticed that you never try to mask the real pain of being gay in a society that does not approve homouality. You are always being so realistic which makes your stories so unbelieveably credible! I admire you for that because I myself often -con-

Chapter 1: Aw, so cute and fluffy and sweet.