“Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish its source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of witherings, of tarnishings.” ― Anaïs Nin
Chapter 1: It's gd! The flutters of the heart when y eet someone, the beating of ur hearts together as u get in-sync, the drifting apart due to time or life.... The separations. Nice little neat bundle. :)
Chapter 1: HEY GRATZ ON ACCOMPLISHING YOUR FIRST FIC!! I totally know how you feel cos I'm also in the midst of writing my own! Though there is definitely room for improvement e.g. the emotional development of characters, I think it's a great start and you'll only get better from here. There's one thing I'm kinda confused about though (probably just me being slow) :P what's the loud bang is it like the door... or sth more morbid O.o?
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