THE BULLY!

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 Please do enjoy and support my first chunjoe fanfic ever.

I LOVE YOU GUYS XOXO.

sorry for my grammar mistake or else since English is not my first language. :)) 

Foreword

Kring kring kring!! *alarm*

Lee chanhee  got into a big fight in his old school . A year ago, He succeed made someone moving to another school. He had a bad discipline records because he used to be a famous bully there so Mr Lee decided to move him to the another school.  Chanhee argue at first but ended up listen to his parents he also promise to be a better student.

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chunjixbyungie
#1
Chapter 8: Awww such a bitter-sweet chapter ~

but at least changrick made up ~ Yay ~

Pouts * More chunjoe please xD
chunjixbyungie
#2
Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Omg nooooooo!
Poor baby ricky TT^TT
Not good with complicated?
You kidding me?
XD the chapter was so good and full of emotions.



Ps: i have one little advice, sweety .
You need to either work on your grammar or let someone proofread your chapter.
As much as i like your story, having grammatical mistakes is a sensitive spot.
Amd while i may not mind it, many other readers won't be this forgiving about it.
^_^
Don't take it to heart, i only want to help.
chunjixbyungie
#3
Chapter 6: aww xD
cute changrick !
Changjo being over protective towards byungiee ~~~
chunjixbyungie
#4
Chapter 4: omo hahahah xD
where this naughty wink going ? *0*
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 3: ok , this seems good but slightly confusing

i mean the pov and quotation marks need to be stressed more and organized .


From what it seems ,byunghun is bottom , rite ? please say yes ! *o*
kpopmichelle #6
Chapter 6: Awww little byungie is confused about his feelings!! >°< looking forward to the next chapter
junseobbie
#7
Chapter 4: Woah Sab seriously this is the best fanfic am not lying seriously . Sab who says you're not good english .. you are so smooth but still there is a little error there but mostly very good. I love it . sab you're so talented .. sab mmg berbakat , keep on writing sab i look forward to another chapter! fighting! jgn putus asa sab haha! you can do it ! Buat smpai chapter 20 sab your ff is interesting sab. fighting!! :D
stellaa
#8
i love it. It sounds so interesting...\(^ω^\)
Update soon please :)))