☇The Beginning。

☇ Second Chance ✕ A Cyborg Dystopia ✕Story Started!
 

The beginning

3 October, 2078

  It started when the Sun disappeared.

 

  “Oh no! Someone has been sleeping in my bed!”

 

  The dramatically surprised voice filled the room as the group of children giggled brightly. It was quiet, save for the teacher’s voice and the occasional fidgety laughter.

 

  Suddenly, a rosy-cheeked boy near the window pointed outside, leaping up in excitement, “Look!”

 

  Kids being kids, most of the class erupted into murmurs at this. One by one, they got up and started to push their way to the window, only to fall silent, eyes widening and jaws dropping at the sight before them.

 

  “What is it?” the teacher asked in slight annoyance as she set the book down and rose from her seat. Gently nudging her students aside, she stepped to the window, fully expecting to see something ridiculous, something that only children would find fascinating. Instead, what she saw made her freeze, mouth opening and closing like a fish as she tried to reason the view outside.

 

  Outside, it was quickly becoming dark as night despite it being only 10am. The reason for this? The millions, no billions, of dark shapes bearing down in neat, orderly formations. They were triangular in shape, each as black as onyx.

 

  Packed closely together, the large numbers they arrived in was enough to color the sky black, blocking the sun and the clouds from view. Occasionally, one of these objects would veer away from the main group and head downwards towards the ground.

 

  It was one of these that had captured the class’ attention. It dropped though the air, so slowly that it appeared to be floating. Smoothly and silently, it touched down in the middle of the playground, narrowly avoiding another cluster of children who had paused their game of football.

 

  Lines started to form in the gleaming surface of the object, spreading into a square that fell open into a ramp, revealing the humanoid creatures that stood within.

 

  For several minutes, the area was deathly silent, children and strangers staring at and observing each other. Then, someone began to wail, a pitiful sound crying for her mother.

 

  It was like the sobs had broken a spell. The creatures emerged from their machine, quiet as ghosts. They looked and moved exactly like humans, but something in the air around them said otherwise.

 

  The one in front, good-looking by human standards, glided to a stop in front of the sniffling child. It tilted its head, kneeling as if to comfort. And then it was lifting a hand, a shiny object clutched in it. A bright green beam flashed, and then silence again.

 

  The child gasped at the creature, shocked into silence, before she fell backwards, a single trickle of blood flowing from the neat, round hole still steaming in her forehead.

 

  The creature stood up slowly, turning to seemingly stare right into the classroom window. Its eyes were pitch black, a dark hole that glinted menacingly.

 

  The class burst into terrified screams, but amidst the chaos, the teacher still stood frozen, unable to tear her eyes away.

 

  She saw its mouth move, and although it should have been impossible to hear anything over her students’ panic, she heard its voice as clear as the day.

 

  “This planet is now the property of the Malri.”

 

authors note

Ay, so that's how it all began! I apologise if the death of that kid disturbs you, but you were warned. Anyways, I'll try to add teasers every so often, writing about this universe is weirdly very fun ヘ(◕。◕ヘ)

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spicea11347
#1
Chapter 12: Oh wow. I really miss this applyfic. I really hope you continue it, too. It's just so different and not something that's seen too often.
Also, a year late, but I hope your exam went well that you were working towards and what not.
-catalyst
#2
Chapter 12: omg hi i just came back suddenly cause i read my app and wanted to check this out
yeah, this chapter is still perfect and you have nothing to worry about :D
also! i hope life is treating you well and you're getting lots of rest and having fun in general! :)
EllaQueLlora
#3
Chapter 12: Awesome! You updated! Okay, first and for most, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!
Secondly, I think I legit did not thought that she would get physical with Jongin. Though I would've done the same if a dude come up all over my grill XD
Still, I love your writing, still on point and refreshing to read! ^_^ Can't wait to read the next chapter!
-catalyst
#4
Chapter 12: THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT YOU HAVE NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT
i mean, i completely understand one's own standards and trying to rewrite it but ending up with something not to one's standards. because that feeling is unpleasant ;; bUT THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT I CRY
jongin is such a dork omg. i can really feel the difference in their views of life and personalities i just love it ;u;
but otl i totally would not expect jongin to be the one setting all these cyborgs loose, although now i can totally see it hahahah
i also understand with your note about updating, so please take your time :)
and that master post seems like a good idea! but only if you have the time to do it ;u;
just so we all know what each character's part is in this story :)

thank you for the update! omg i loved it hahah
( minaaaaa i cry she's so sweet and motherly and i know this is my character and my app but still ;u; )
luinil
#5
Chapter 12: omg i just realized i didn't comment on the first chapter even if i was totally sure i did D:
the first one was a rather funny chapter! especially the parts with daejin, omg, i like him but i'm pretty sure if i was rei i'd react in the same way, haha!
and i thought you said you're terrible at writing dialogues but it doesn't really seem so? at least, i find them entertaining and quite realistic?
and also, i can't imagine how high your standards are because for me this second chapter was very good? T^T

so it was because of jongin that daejin's door was open in the first chapter? :o jongin, you should be more careful! zhuqi is right when she calls him a moron, haha.
i'm really looking forward to the next chapter T^T and as long as the quality of the chapters is high (like it is right now honestly), it's okay if you don't update too often since you're busy! :D

oh, about the masterpost.. why not? if there are too many characters it could be useful, especially if they're original characters or idols not everyone might be familiar with...?
-catalyst
#6
Chapter 11: I FINALLY HAVE TIME TO READ THIS LOVELY CHAPTER
( and read the last teaser too but you know. it was awesome like usual. )

first of all, i didn't expect this chapter to be so long! it's so nice!
second of all, your dialogue is great! there's nothing you need to change about anything ;u;
omg but i would totally be creeped out too if i suddenly looked and saw two open eyes staring back at me
like and what's with daejin hahahah
i love how he was just yelling at the box trying to wake up chanyeol and it wasn't really doing anything at all
i'm already loving the dynamics between these two
i'm excited to see how the rest will come together and fall into place :D
yowamushi
#7
Chapter 11: aaaahh omg love this chapter so much! sorry for commenting late-
anyway, I think I've said it before, but I'll just say it again- I love your writing style!
don't worry about not writing much dialogue since you did a great job describing each moment and what the character is feeling, it's really beautiful.
and I love these two! rei and daejin will make /really/ good friends in the future. lmao.
I love how rei is scared shirtless over daejin's weird personality too!
looking forward for the next hero's introduction!
EllaQueLlora
#8
Chapter 11: Omfg ASDFGHJKL!!! I've said it once and I'll say it again, you're one HELLUVA WRITER!! I was so engrossed in reading because of all the details you written! I'm in love with your writing basically babe!!! Can't wait to see who's next!!! Fighting author-nim!!
luinil
#9
Chapter 10: i just realized i sent you the pm and didn't comment on the revelation chapter so i'm doing it now lol T^T
first thing first thanks for choosing yubin among the creativity plotlines! >_< i really thought she maybe was a bit too much but you likes her enough to choose her so omg thank you so much *^*
then, congrats to the other chosen ones! can't wait to see how all the characters will interact haha
and lol don't worry about the pictures!! they're cool!! *^* it's a better list than i thought haha!
eunmini #10
Chapter 10: my gawd!!! you really made my day I've been pretty sick these days and this just made it a lot better ^_^! congratz to the other chosen ones.. They are all soo good and of course thank you so much for choosing Aeyoung.. can I hug you?! //hugs anyways.. but really I can't for this story to take off!! It's going to be one hell of an adventure.. The edits are great! I really love how you put the effort into making this for us! I don't mind any of the extras.. it makes it even better ^^

it's totally okay don't worry about it. I want the two te end up together rather early. I'll pm you the rest ^_^!