Chapter 7: this story was honestly so amazing. i loved it so much and i was so enveloped in the plot the entire time. if i’m being honest, i loved it so much to analyze multiple different characters & their actions (including youngjae and jinyoung). not sure if my friends are annoyed by my multiple paragraphs that i wrote about this story, but oh well. you’re such a talented writer. everything about this story was so incredible and interesting. there was never a moment of boredom while i was reading the story.

Chapter 7: I can't even write my comment :' /?
It really drained my feeling. I even get a really bad mood when i read the part of this story. I get really sad when i realize about mark, jackson, jaebum, jinyoung, and youngjae's relationship. And i felt my heart broke when i read about bambam and yugyeom's relationship :' i even throw my smartphone when i read the part when you write jinyoung's character and when jaebum did something with youngjae :'
I barely willing to read this kind of story, but i just found this story by coincidence (it's on my browser's history, i don't know how/?) and i read it till the end. And it's already stir my feeling. I get moody for the whole day because of this :'
Daebak. 4 thumbs up for this story author-nim! I sincerely said, it's the best story i ever read!

Chapter 7: This was beautiful. It was not light at all and sometimes when I was really tired I couldn't understand a bit. This thing is heavy and it's draining the reader emotionallly but this are the kind of valuable stories. This is amazing. I barely get so heavy stuff to read but I love it. And your melancholic style fitted perfectly. Just truly amazing. Thanks a lot. I really enjoyed reading it~

Chapter 7: Holy moly this is literally THE MOST BEAUTIFULLY DESIGNED FANFIC I'VE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE OF READING. I did the Gatsby for my A levels and you really nailed that style. It was simply made even better by the fact that it was set using my biases (Bambam and Yugyeom) and within the modern time.

Bravo author-nim you have definitely raised the standard of literature on AFF.

Sooo good.... I'm actually gonna have to recommend this to my friend to was struggling to understand the meanings behind Gatsby. I don't think I can stress how good this is. But my most favourite quality about this fic is how it doesn't just look at the 'American Dream' and humanity (supposedly) but how it relates to everything. I found myself relating to Bambam's childhood where he began to try and mold himself according to the rich kids in his class in order to sponge off of their excess. I, myself had, who I thought was a great friend, who would constantly invite me round her big house and give me gifts for my birthday a lot better then the ones my own parents gave. She and her family used me to reassure themselves that they had more than average. Unfortunately I didn't have a Yugyeom *sob* unlike Bam bam to save me. The breaking point for me was when I began to actually beg her for food from her lunch, because it was better than mine, or when I would single out my other friends in favour of just being near her. She eventually left me to go to private school and so I was lucky enough not to get as carried away as Bambam and Yuygeom did.

But seriously thank you for opening my eyes again. I don't think I've ever read a fic quite at as thoughtful and perfect as this.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Chapter 7: Shot. Smack dab in the FEELZ. Seriously, this story has publication potential in my opinion, the point gets across, a relationship is maintained.... It really turns your perspective on how you should (or rather shouldn't) live. The grammar and vocabulary, along with excerpts from a classic, are a huge plus, with great quality throughout, and no repetition in beginnings of sentences or in usage of verbs on an obnoxious scale. 10/10 would recommend. (Lol it's probably more, but if I go over the scale it'd be a ridiculous number)

Chapter 7: Also I expected no one to live so thanks *thumbs up*

Chapter 7: This is probably one of the best fics I've ever written in my life oh my god I just, it's such an out there idea which drew me in and then you proceeded to LITERALLY DESTROY MY SOUL (so thank you for that) but honestly I've learned from reading this, and it's made me think about life and love and what's really important...so thank you so much for writing this beautiful masterpiece omg you're so amazing it's just so perfect ❤️❤️

Chapter 7: this is just, amazing, breathtaking, beautifully written. i can't believe i just found this story now. i never liked this kind of au but i'm so glad i read this bc now i'm crying :') you're an amazing writer!

Chapter 7: I love you author-nim. ㅜㅡㅜ ♡♡♡

Chapter 7: Sorry for discovering this fic lateeeeee.... but honestly this fic are amazinggggggggg!!!