This going to take awhile. Please spend some of your times reading this XD. This update, which is NOT the last chapter, is consists of four parts.

A : The Poll

B : The Review

C : Shameless Advertisment

D : Author's Reminder [important!]

Let's go together, one by one! -take your hands and walk together-

A : THE POLL

The ending is fixed :) but I still want to know my awesome readers' opinions :)

B : THE REVIEW

I requested a review HERE for this fic, and this is what I got :) 
 

Story:  10

Author: pynkfaery

Title: 5/5

Description/Foreword:  4/5

Short and sweet. I like it. Draws the readers in, and lets them know that the story will be a rollercoaster of emotions.

I won't grade you on the foreword, since it's basically just details about the story.

Originality/Creativity/Plot:  28/30

I've read some similar stories, but I have to say, I don't think I've read something as heartbreaking as this. Originality is evident in your story, so good job on this plot bunny.

It's a good plot, really. The story is so sweet, and it's filled with every type of emotion that a person could possibly think of. No plot holes, and the way that it's formatted is great.

Writing Style/Format/Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Vocabulary:  23/30

Your writing is great. I'm sort of iffy on the present tense, because I find it harder to write and read it that way. Other than that, it's good.

I love how you stayed in 3rd person, and how you can easily describe everyone and their actions. It's a well written formal prose.

Everything is well written, but there are some spelling and grammar mistakes that you need to fix, such as run away apostrophes on "its", and the lack of an "s" at the end of words that need them due to present tense. Vocabulary is very very well-used when it comes to describing emotions.

Characterizations/Details:  24/25

Characterization is amazing. Everyone's thoughts and feelings are well written and descriptive.

General Comments:  This story is amazing. I loved it. The feeling put into it made my heart wrench, and it didn't help that I was listening to 2NE1's "It Hurts" at the same time too. So kudos to you, other than spelling and grammar mistakes you need to fix to help the story flow better, it's very nice.

Score: 84/95 (-5 for no grading of Foreword)

Recommend!

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I am happy with the review :) Tell me what you guys think too, ne ^^?

C : Shameless Advertisment XD

Last 10/10/10 I came up with this fic, '10'.

And I continue my craziness by writing a oneshot titled 'Eleven' last 11/11/11.

Warning, it feature a really weird pairing BUT! BUT! Pynkfaery will be really happy if you can spend a lil of your precious times to read it HERE. She will be REALLY happy ^^!

D : Author's Note

1. I am now working on my other fic, "Please. With Love." which a total opposite of '10' since it's not , and it is a comedy love story XD, so please wait for a while. I'll get back to 10 as soon as I'm done with the new chapter of 'Please With Love.' neh :)

2. I chose INFINITE's Tic Toc to be this fic's theme song {LOL]. I use the song for the video teaser in here : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0WhOl0-nwYY   It is good if you already have the song in your PC. Because I always write this fic with this song on repeat, and if there's one request I'd like to ask from all of you my amazing readers, it is for you guys to put this song on repeat too when you guys are reading the final chapter later. You know, even though we are far from each other, at least we can share the same environment and emotions of reading the final chapter, no? [pynkfaery is officially crazy!]. So yeah, if you don't have the song yet, you can download it here : http://www.mediafire.com/?qvphqe1deadaeg9  And if you don't like INFINITE, please ignore me XD LOL

3. I have a very short teaser of the final chapter, which is the title of it :

Together.

Wait for it, ne :)

Signing off,

PYNKFAERY