Am I Wrong?

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Literally my first work. i had to do an English writing assignment, and this is what totalled. Please don't be too harsh ^^ i'm going to put up the final draft, but i'll probably go through it again, do some editing and continue it.

Foreword

     ~His eyes. Those amazing, shining, brown eyes. When he looks at me, my heart skips a beat. Beautiful smile. When he shows his teeth,i can feel my blood rushing to my cheeks to tint them the shade of the cherry blossoms that bloom right outside in our garden. Those hands. Large, helpful hands that help me with my every job. Who is he? My best friend, my first crush, the man of my dreams. My servant, Lee Hyukjae. And who am I? The prince of Hangug, Lee Donghae.
 

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sayeunhae
#1
Chapter 1: Omg Hyukjae will be killed?? O.O

The 1st chapter is good :) hope you update soon..