Chapter 3: I really pity him whoever that is. Its really not healthy kind of love. One sided love is always sad. But please dont commit suicide...*sobs
Chapter 2: Okay, wow. Your first person narrative is really great. You capture the emotions in a way that is natural. First person narratives usually feel a bit forced to me, but this one just flows. *sighs happily*
The fact that it really is impossible to determine in whose POV this is written has just further drawn me in. If there is one thing I am weak against it is ambiguities. Can't wait to read more~
Chapter 1: Deep love~~~ but, a bit sad because he keep his feeling
Now, I am really curious whose POV in this chapter ><
Will wait patiently for next chapter. Fighting!!
Ps. I like your writing style :D
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