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           In some sense they are like a mirrors. Neither human,machines nor dolls . The 'dolls' are called an android. Android is a robots with a human appearance. 
             They can grow if it is lavished enough with love and care from its owner.

Hyukjae found a doll at the garbage dump near the beach called 'EAST SEA' . He were too fascinated by the looks of the doll so he decided to take the doll home. At first he thought the doll were just a normal doll, but soon he found out that the doll is a product called Android Human. He take a good care of the Android and even named the Android. They grew up together , everythings were perfect until...one day the Android suddenly collapse..


                                                           'True love should be lived like an unperfect circle,
                                                                That has its bumps but NEVER end '
 

                                                                               'Stop wasting your time hyukjae ,im at the end of my lifespan.
                                                                                                                          There's nothing you can do about it ' ...

                                                                                  'No!! shut up, stop talking nonscence . I have to find it!! ' ...
 

PAIRING : TOP DONGHAE
             BOTTOM HYUKJAE

GENRE(S) : COMEDY , , ROMANTIC

 

Donghae ,                                                  Hyukjae
 

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kiwicolada 1600 streak #1
Chapter 1: The plot idea was sweet. Sad in between but really cute. Think about lazy Hyukjae gave his all to save Donghae, but failed in the first try was heartbreaking. But it's nice that they get a second chance. Thanks for trying and sharing this.
shery_holic #2
Chapter 1: Fluffy story
sjlovableboys #3
Chapter 1: It was so sweet. I really love it.
miss_chievious #4
Chapter 1: awww!! so sweet !i love it loooveee it <3
Lonlytear #5
Chapter 1: Awwwwwwwww that was soooooo sweeeeeeeeeet *____*
That was great for a first timer ..write more poweeeeeees
And I want android hae too >___<
Thanks for sharing ^^
kiddoELF #6
Chapter 1: Waaaa it was so good
hybrid child with haehyuk version
Keep up the good work! Fighting~
de_m00n #7
Chapter 1: So cute~~~ :3
Bookworm01 #8
Chapter 1: This is cute! Ultra mega super duper whooper wowzer cute!
Don't apologize for your first time. No one gets it right the first time. It takes a few tries or maybe just one more before you get it just right. Even geniuses in varying studies took many times before they became experts. Try and try until you succeed. Keep trying and you'll get there. You have some talent in writing and all you need to do now is develop it more. Anyway, as long as you know that you did your best in writing this story, you can face the world with your head held high.

As for the story...
Plot twist: Some kids/androids were "recycled" to restore Donghae to his normal artificial form.
XD But seriously. What if Donghae was revived because of the "recycled" materials of Dr. Kris? Wouldn't that be cool?
Strange as it sounds, I like the part when Donghae died (technically, shut down) on Hyukjae the most. I don't know... I'm into character death more than I should be so I feel a bit happy yet a bit sad when a character dies. As the saying goes, “The show must go on.” And it shall. I think that death is a really fascinating topic (but anyone else I know begs to differ) and it usually sets the actions, emotions and events in motion (for those stories with death in it, anyway).
Anyway, I liked your story. I was just baffled at the existence of the Droplet of the Moon and how Donghae was actually revived. Granted, I just want answers to these questions, in the form of graphic description of these events, but I insist that you don't answer any of them for fear of any possible spoilers.
I still have yet to figure out the reason behind the title of the story, Error. I'm still a bit curious but that's just me. You don't have to change the entire story (or add events, for that matter) just for one mere reader.
Thanks a bunch for making my holidays a bit more cheerful! ^_^
evil_cute #9
Chapter 1: i like this story,,,>o<
so glad that they have their happy ending,,,,,>_< i love when their quarel,,,,
my favorite is when hyukie stipr hae to sleep on him,,, that so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee>o<
starlightelf #10
Chapter 1: So happy they are together :D thanks for the lovely fic ^_^
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