Fallen For You

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Myunghan had fallen.

Barom floated in space and let his gaze sweep over the world: the way the atmosphere glittered from this distance made it look like the earth were some sort of jewel, worn on the neck of the universe. He knew better, though, knew that the Earth was only a worn and tired bauble, clouded by sin and by corruption, and that fact only made the fall even worse.

A frown pulled at the corners of his lips as he flew closer to the world, intent on finding him and demanding answers from him. They’d done everything together, had been partners for so long that without him, Barom felt almost empty. Sure, heaven was full of the wonders of creation, colors that the human eye could never see, fruits with tastes that the human tongue could never taste, but all of that only served to remind him of that one bitter fact.

He had fallen. Voluntarily. Had given up his position in heaven, his wings, his immortality, and even Barom… for what?

For a paltry life in a city called Philadelphia.

And now Barom was determined to know why.

Foreword

Merry Christmas, TaeGyu_DekaChin!!!


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starlightdust #1
Chapter 1: this was extremely bittersweet but absolutely beautiful ;; i personally like to think barom didnt give up his wings and just stayed with myunghan until he died but either way this was beautifully written and now i'm gonna go curl up and cry
starlightdust #2
I'M JUST GOING TO COMMENT BEFORE I READ THIS. ITS MYUNGHAN AND BAROM OMG. I DDONT EVEN KNOW PEOPLE WROTE FICS ABOUT THEM. LITERALLY MY MOUTH DROPPED OPEN IN HAPPINESS. ok now im going to read. if i dont comment again know that i have died from sadness possibly
TaeKookHope #3
Chapter 1: This was really good! I like the last sentence Myunghan said. It was beautiful! Awesome work, author-nim!
Amalya
#4
Chapter 1: Well wasn't that just a beautiful, bittersweet read? lol Lovely story though and you pulled it together very well. The pacing was measured with timely jumps and the characters were more than believable. I really enjoyed your utilization of angels and the mythology of this world. It was fascinating!

Even more, the relationship of Myunghan and Barom was touching and heartbreaking. T_T That last line sums it up so well and really puts the whole scenario into context. Right in the damn feels. *cries more* It was nice to see that even after the fall, they were still so incredibly attuned to each other. It's almost magical how they react and still feel the presence of the other. And that little touch with reading dreams was a wonderful bit of insight. :)

Great job and a wonderful read!
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#5
Chapter 1: Oh wow. That was beautiful. Seriously. Fallen angel Myunghan now has to be one of my most favorite things ever. I love him T^T
Thank you so much, I love this so much, it hurts *sobs*