Bulletproof

Description

Most of their conversations include Yifan asking questions Chanyeol doens't know how to answer.

Foreword

For suppai
Genre/Rating: NC-17, R 
Warning: tw for substance abuse, abusive families, s, and alcohol 
Words: 5.5k 
Author's Note: Wow this fic was supposed to be so different and 15k, but I ran out of time and I am so sorry for submitting so late! On a lighter note, wow I love the song (Train-Bulletproof Picasso) and you have great music taste! I listened to it like 20 times on repeat. I hope you like the fic though TT-TT

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helloimrayn
#1
Chapter 1: Oh my god the ending, omg the theme, omg chanyeol's character omg everything pmgomgogjsosps the anxiety though omfgggg
It felt so real my my my i love this kind of story and how you portrayed everything ugh i just love this
shinigami_aim
#2
Chapter 1: oh my god. seriously, oh my god.

you make me believe the happy virus chanyeol is actually someone who lives on pills everyday. oh my god.
ZacKris
#3
Chapter 1: Wow. This is great. The way you portray their character feels so real.
You know what, I feel like I know you but I don't want to assume anything. The way you wrote this almost the same with this person.
cyd4294
#4
Chapter 1: Omg why do i feel like i know you ;;
This fic is just >.<
brittlepin #5
Chapter 1: man. this is so well written D:
the touch of everything is so real, the characters are alive and the environmental setting and everything just- ngh! I don't like drug fics, may be b/c I'm a person clean to my bones and I know the they can get you into, but when I read something good, I do appreciate it, and this was a really good read.

You left it open ended. So goddamn open ended that I can't even figure out if Chanyeol will stay stuck in this cycle or if he'll actually develop the will to change.
Yifan, oh so precious Yifan and man, I even liked Happy, despite the fleeting ninja presence haha

Good fic, man. Good fic!
funkybastard
#6
Chapter 1: OH GOD!!! I'M NOT OKAY! WHATS THIS PAIN?? This is so well written! and BEAUTIFUL! I can wait to find who you are, author-nim! This was perfect!! <3333
blackhircine #7
Oh wow.whoa.
This is just a masterpiece ! It's not that often I've found a dark-themed krisyeol stories,and yours is just one of the best.
I really hope you'll make a full version (that 15k) of this fic because this is just amazing ;___; !
I really like how you write this, every scene pf it ;_;
Keep up the good work!
suppai #8
Chapter 1: oh i've read it two times before commenting just because i don't wanted to put just a 'i like it' here ;___;~<3
thank you author-nim, trully, thank you from the bottom of my heart~~

first of all, i was i little surprised (in a good way) with a yeol-centric, cuz this song (especially) always reminded me of yifan/krisyeol. and i'm very slow, and (kind of) really don't remember what i wrote in the prompts lol
but, for now and after to brain a little, it (really) suits yeol better, so i'm glad you did it in this way <3

i (really) loved everything here, all the details, the fells, and the characterization that you did. but i liked especially the huge and contradictory dark dog 'happy' - i really hope it means what i think it means.

you can see how many metaphors you put here? and you really don't need all the 15k of words for it. just wow. wow. WOW great job author-nim /thumbs up
i'm really in love <3
i'm sorry for not making a such 'big' comment here, but i'm at office now, and i'm trying not draw the attention of my boss lol

oh, i'm glad you liked the song, cuz it always give me feels <3
and, one more time, thank you <3
i probably will thank you (again) properly after the reveals, and so...