I SHOULDN'T CRY

Broken

I open my eyes.  All I see are parametics rushing.  I feel liveless.  Bright light, big walls, people dress all in blue and white. People were pushing, some screaming, is all a mess. I feel weightles.  I can't feel anything.

"He's Alive!"

I hear beaping sound.  I feel my heart beating fast.  Everyone is screaming.

CHAOS


That all I hear. That all I feel.  That all I'am. That all I see. That all, That everything. Everything is chaos.

I try to remenber-         

        WAT
ER 


I feel water on my legs, arms,faces.  Little drops of- "He made it!!"

you screaming for "fuc- y-" "scre- or". I try to say it but the words can't come out.

    PAT PAT PAT

I feel hands on my faces. I see a big round faces, Bright blue eyes, Pink lips, Brown hair, and White mask.

     SMILE

She's smiling. Why??  Why are all these people so happy? 

"Are You okay, you survive, you're alive"

ALIVE ALIVE ALIVE ALIVE

ALIVE

She said I was ALIVE. Was I dead?? Did I died??

DROPS DROPS DROPS DROPS DROPS

WHY DO I FEEL DROPS OF water in my arms, feet, Everywhere.

TEARS

Cunfuse, sad, mad, annoy, Who are them?? Where am I?  What happen, Who am I?

I feel so ......................... CHAOS

It all chaos I feel chaos. I feel so confused.  FULL CHAOS

I feel chaos I see chaos.  CRY, LAUGH, SMILE, ALIVE, CONFUSED.

All these people were crying, now they're laughing, smiling,screaming, that I'm ALIVE.

I'm alive......

Was I dead. I feel a tear roll down my cheeks. I try to stop the tears but I counldn't.

I SHOULDN'T CRY.

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A/N: Okay this chapter is kinda boring but that because I'm introducing the story to yall.  I'll promise I'll get better by next chapter.  Anyways so you guys see what I'm talking about in the foreword. I told yall my style of writting is weird.  In my writting if you read it i'll look like is not making senses. It'll also look like i didn't check it but, it was meant to be like that. ^-^ Anywho hope yall enjoy.

OH YEAH, I'm going to start a new fanfic is call WORTHLESS but I can't choose if i'll be jongkey or onkey.

plz help me guys and girls what should I do.

Comment if you choose Jongkey or Onkey. The one with the most vote will be the couple for my new story.






 

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jjongluvbummie
#1
Chapter 6: uh it's more and more interesting with every chp and something must really bad happened to key for him to be being this depresse poor boy.now that other four mention here its going to be more good.

can't wait to know more��
SteampunkInformants #2
Chapter 5: The secret messages make this story 10 times more interesting.
nedy90
#3
Chapter 4: What they did to me is unforgetable.. I cant wait to infold all this mistery
magicbananas #4
Chapter 4: This is cool, kinda like intense ^u^
I want more!! Haha
jjongluvbummie
#5
Chapter 1: It's short but good.like your writing style and waiting for more.for your next fic I will say jongkey and jongkey.☺
magicbananas #6
Can't wait!!! ^~^