"Untitled" (The Cheonggyecheon)
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So, I've been experiementing with my writing style and taking a break from my other depressing things (just for a bit) and I wanted to work on this.
I'm a little nervous to post it because it has some personal elements to it, even though you all wouldnt know, it's still like, my baby.
Kyuhyun and Siwon are more different here than I've ever really written them. They're at the beginning of their relationship and they're both bringing their baggage out into the open. Kyuhyun's bringing his personal insecurities and Siwon is bringing his past along. I don't know how this is going to end yet exactly, but I just want to see how this relationship can evolve.
It's written in first person, and the first bit is a lot of Kyu's inner thoughts, but it'll change to more dialogue later.
I really hope you like it, at least a little. And PLEASE, feedback would really be helpful, because i have no idea what i'm doing, and if people aren't really responsive, I might stop it early. I don't want to blackmail you guys or anything lol, but I really need your comments for this one.
Enjoy :)
Foreword
“Don’t go,” Changmin had said. I didn’t have to question his seriousness when I looked up into his eyes.
We were having a midweek drink after work and I had just spilled the beans like a silly schoolgirl.
“But—
“Do you want to be used? Again?” he asked raising an eyebrow before taking a sip from his wine glass.
“I think we’re remembering it differently,” I mumbled as I swirled the ruby liquid around in my glass.
“Kyu,” Changmin warned again as he looked over at me again. “I don’t think I have to remind you about how close you came to loosing your last time. He turned down your offer for a second date and it’s like you were ready to just walk into traffic or something. I don’t like what he does to you—
“What do you mean what he does to me? He was nothing but perfect the entire time—
“Right, when you were on the date! But what’s going to happen the next day? And G-d, if you sleep with him again, which I’m sure you are, it’s only going to make things worse. He. Doesn’t. Want. A. Boyfriend. Spare yourself Kyu, please? You're way too good for him,” said Changmin touching his arm.
“How can I beat perfection?” I mumbled to which Changmin sighed only to end with a chuckle.
“You’re hopeless. Absolutely hopeless,” he said shoving my shoulder.
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