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I posted the first chapter of a the longer version if the story!😍 enjoy and sorry if it ! Comments are appreciated!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/861994

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Jordkookie #1 Jun 16, 2017 01:25:12

Chapter 3: Chapters are needed<3!!!!

Asan_ficHORA #2 Oct 21, 2015 09:49:27

Chapter 1: Jeeeezus! This is so cuteeee omg! <3

Sweet_Joongie #3 Dec 18, 2014 23:17:00

Chapter 2: Wah, a chaptered version would be even more awesome =)

MizzPeel0007 #4 Nov 22, 2014 19:40:04

Chapter 1: Wow, I just love this story, Jackson is such s bad hot guy you just can´t help it. Jaebum was the one that alerted Jackson. Glad that I came across this story.

Markson4ever #5 Nov 20, 2014 19:37:16

author-nim have u decided which u will do? :)

myluvlyyj2jun #6 Nov 19, 2014 05:08:43

Chapter 2: might as well add mpreg~~
Cause gosh i love mpreg and there is too little jark mpreg ff
So please~~
sorry just giving ideas...hope you'll consider it...

myluvlyyj2jun #7 Nov 19, 2014 05:06:45

Chapter 2: you should make this awesome fantastic story CHAPTERED!!!
Please~~

KasaiFates #8 Nov 16, 2014 14:40:01

Chapter 2: LONGER!!!!!
please?....

--inspiritic #9 Nov 3, 2014 13:45:45

Chapter 2: I actually really love the idea!! kinda wish it was like that in real life v.v but please do make it longer if you can. I would love to read this plot!

prettygirl20 #10 Nov 1, 2014 22:45:05

Chapter 2: Longer version please