Life is difficult without you

Description

Kyungsoo isn't the typical 16-year-old. He is bad at socialising to say the least, his muteness isn't helping that matter in any way.

He relies on certain routines and orders that make him feel comfortable. One day though someone steps into his life that breaks every rule that he had accustomed himself with. How will he handle that change?

 

''There was this time in my life where I thought I could do anything. I thought I could climb the highest mountain, become anything I wanted and also live free without restrictions of any kind. A tear ran down my cheek. Its warm temperature was ironic thinking of the cold thoughts it had formed by.

I soon learned that those were cowardly stupid ideas of a life that only existed far in the back of my head, not related to the true world in any way.''

Foreword

Okay so this is the first time that I wrote any type of fanfiction, so please bear that in mind when reading ^-^. Also, my english isn't the best, since it is only my second language. I hope you have fun reading this! (I definetly had fun writing it xD). Btw I am looking for a beta reader, so if you're intrested please write me a message ^^' <3

 

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Bookworm01 #1
Chapter 1: Of course I'll be patient! This is good. It already raises questions on the first chapter... Or is it just me?

Why is Kyungsoo so anti-social? What could be the most probable reason for Jongin staying in his room? I'll start guessing... (Haha, please don't confirm any of it. I'd prefer if my questions were answered through the updates.) Is it because Jongin and his parents fought and he left the house? Is it because they fought and he was sent to live there by his parents so he could be away from his friends (I'm really making a wild guess at this point) which were bad influences to him? Is it because they're going to study in the same school?

I'm quite curious. Is this a flashback of some kind from the actual fight they, Kyungsoo and Jongin, may or may not have in the future? The narration tells me that it is, in a way, a flashback. Especially this line:

“Everything should change that day.There was an unknown car to the left, parked on our property. Wondering whose car that could possibly be followed by some legitimate reasoning, I was about to witness something I wouldn't have thought was possible.”

It makes me feel like Kyungsoo's looking back to how they met while they're fighting in the present (or not, it's just my theory).

I could imagine Kyungsoo on top of a mountain, dreaming of that first few paragraphs. Overall, this is very good! ^_^ I did notice a few typos though so, when you have time, I'd like it if you consider a bit of revising this chapter to check for typos. :-) I'm not saying this to discourage you in writing. I just wanted to point it out. That's all.

Thank you for updating so quickly! ^_^
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