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033Ukiss
Shin sumin
POSITION #3 [ ♦ ] Jang Young Hye [ ♦ ] U-Kiss' Kiseop [ ♦ ] CHOSEN
AUTHOR [ ♦ ] My chara, hope you like her!
CO AUTHOR [ ♦ ] This is the co-author's character~~ :)
KimAeri
Jung nari
POSITION #2 [ ♦ ] Byeon Seo Eun [ ♦ ] BAP's Himchan [ ♦ ] CHOSEN
AUTHOR [ ♦ ] Co-Author's chara^^
CO AUTHOR [ ♦ ] This is my character~~ :D
hyo-jin
Choi jaerin
POSITION #6 [ ♦ ] Suna/Seon Ah [ ♦ ] EXO's Tao [ ♦ ] PENDING
AUTHOR [ ♦ ] Hello Lizzy, thanks for applying! The first thing I saw that you didn't put a backup faceclaim, so please do so. Also, the age range for Toxic is 1991-1993, and you pput her down as a 1994 liner. Can you also please summerize her good and bad traits at the top? Also, please put her parents name in Korean. Last thing is to fill Tao and Jaerin's interactions. Please fix your mistakes and your good to go!
CO AUTHOR [ ♦ ] Hey, Lizzy! Thanks for applying. :)
First off: ASDFGHJKL TAO ULTIMATE BIAS YES. Ahem. A couple of smaller things I noticed, first off: We'd like it if you'd put a back-up faceclaim, just in case. Also, the age range is 1991-1993, and because Jaerin is born in late 1994, that'd make her too young. Just change her birth year to 1993 and you'll be good to go. Also, I saw that you listed out her good and bad traits in your personality description, but could you just summarize them on the top? It make things a lot easier for us. However, I personally didn't see anything wrong with your personality, so just fix up the things I pointed out, and you should be accepted! :)
liltaytay45
Kim hyorin
POSITION #8 [ ♦ ] Jo Eun Hee [ ♦ ] BAP's Daehyun [ ♦ ] ACCEPTED
AUTHOR [ ♦ ] Hello Taylor, thanks for applying! So you fixed all of your mistakes before I got the chance to review. But anyways, you're accepted!
CO AUTHOR [ ♦ ] Hey, Taylor! Thanks for applying. :)
Can I just say that I love your face claim? Ugh, she looks SO perfect with that purple/silver hair. :DAnyways, onto my review. The age range for TOXIC is 1991-1993, but because she's an early 1994-liner, I personally don't have a problem with it (that'd be up to the author to decide). I also think that it's pretty realistic Kai is her brother (they both have the freaking awesome dance genes), but if anything, I'd suggest making her one of the older sisters. Just a suggestion, but I personally have no problem with it. Her dancing rating is too low for her position, Main Dancer should have a score of between 90 and 99. Also, the author doesn't want any love interest from YG, so we'd have to go with your backup, Chen. Thanks for fixing that up! You are still pending because the author does have final say if you are accepted or not, but your application looks fine to me. :)
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POSITION [ ♦ ] FACECLAIM [ ♦ ] LOVE INTEREST [ ♦ ] LOVE INTEREST [ ♦ ] STATUS
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# OF APPLICANTS [ ♦ ] 2
UPDATED [ ♦ ] 10/05
POSITION #1 [ ♦ ] 0
POSITION #2 [ ♦ ] Taken
POSITION #3 [ ♦ ] Taken
POSITION #4 [ ♦ ] 0
POSITION #5 [ ♦ ] 0
POSITION #6 [ ♦ ] 1
POSITION #7 [ ♦ ] 0
POSITION #8 [ ♦ ] 1
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