Chapter 1: yes please write a sequel! thank you!

Chapter 1: Aww, they're too cute! I love how you express their emotions so clearly through their words and actions. It makes it really touching with very few words. I normally hate Khuntoria but this is changing my opinion ^^. You're a good writer, keep writing <3

Chapter 1: I love this first chapter! Well, waiting for your next chapter! Fighting!