The Prize
◤Flying Pika: Review'n'Ad◢→ MOVED! //Rubric
01 / Title+Foreword+Description= 10/10- i liked the last sentence that really pulls the reader in, "What fate has in store for them?" But it should really be re-worded as,"What fate is in store for them?"
02 / Plot and Originality= 35/40- i think that the plot was well done, because im a fluff reader but- i usually dont see these plots with playboys, and the ship (Suhan) is definitly original for stories.
03 / Characters= 15/15- well done in this, it was quite different from the usual ships i read, so it was nice being able to experience a ship ive never read before, with such a well story line!
04 / Layout= 15/15- pretty neat in my opinion, you used emphasis like for Luhan's buisness card, it was in a different font, so you used that well.
05 / Pictures/ posters = ?/15-none applicable here
06 / Extra Notes= 5/5- i personally dont read with this ship, or just rated m in genral, so it was so emotional(?), with these characters! Out of: 85, you got: 80!(Note that the picture/poster area didnt apply here so-)
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