Chapter 1: the way you briefly explain both taehyun's and seungyoon's traits is immensely awesome it feels just too real of how taehyun being the type who once received more even up to the end of his life and the warm hearted seungyoon who just feel enough with smaller act of lovey dovey- compared to him- taehyun had given. it's painfully good at the end that taehyun couldnt even say a word; of how he is actually sorry and at the same time grateful for seungyoon or just a breath of "i love you". Gosh im still crying. youre the best!
Chapter 1: I liked it ;; mostly because I liked Taehyun and Seungyoon's characterizations... I found them very realistic, like everything you said about their relationship was how it could really be between them. Like everything fitted well, how Taehyun was the one who showed less love and how Seungyoon always accepted him :;____; this was so touching and ugh it's so sad because of his death ;;
But I really wish you could write more about them, if you want, I would really like to read more :)) I truly liked the way you wrote about them!!
(and sometimes we all need a bit of angst, even it's sad XD)
Chapter 1: Man, that was sad. T.T I love this story but you could make another chapter or a story telling their little relationship more specific and include a little fight between them and how they make out. That would be sweet. By the way, I have my own story I just published yesterday (Yeay :D) And if you could check it out, it would be sweet >< If you find it interesting, you can tell your friends about it :D And it has Taehyun in it too >< Except that I made him do the evil character. My story is based on the anime Hunter x Hunter. If you don't like anime, never mind, it's cool :D But if you like it, it's super cool >< If you have friends that like anime, you can also tell them about it :D Thank you in advance n_n And I'm looking forward for another story from you.
Chapter 1: I always think twice before read angst or characther death. I don't know why I read this TT___TT this is so heartbreaking. Be strong seungyoon. So sad that Taehyun can't say anything to him for the last time, something like "I love you Seungyoon"
Thanks for writing this authornim, this is beautiful. Hope you can write another kangnam.
Chapter 1: I was in doubt of reading it or not (cause I read the warning) .... Fortunately I read it, yeah its really sad :C made my heart cry. But its beautiful, short & beautiful. Every word and Taehyun's thought while he was "dying" .... ;^; oh.... my poor heart, my poor Seungyoon. Life is so short ~
Thank u for this oneshot, you are a good writter, hope you can write more about k&n (with a happy ending maybe?) :D
Keep writing!
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