Chapter 1: It was cute, I thought Kris was gonna be a serial killer LOL. And the reason why his garden was so pretty was because he had some bodies back there ^.~ HAHAHA
Just one thing, you use the word "on" a lot like he was "is he going to put the drugs on my drink?" Actually it would be "is he going to put the drugs in my drink" or "he moved in on the abandoned house" it just should be "he moved in the abandoned house" hope I didn't hurt your feelings. Not my intention. ^.^
Really did enjoy this story and keep up the good work!!
Chapter 1: Oooooooooo........ So cute and cool at the same time. Can you make a sequel? If you can't I could understand. Btw, love this fanfic sooo much!!!>~< ^~^
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