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this is so sad and kibum is so cute and innocent... I also wish there was a part two just so we could see what happened later.

subscribed! bcoz it looks great! :D

I really enjoyed this story. I live the innocence of it and ahhhh I really, really liked it

Chapter 1: It was adorable and heartbreaking. I don't know how to feel! I love the innocence of this, seeing the world through a child's eyes. Seeing how naive they can be but then watching as they get their first real tastes of the real world. Kibum's life was just about as perfect as it could be, while Jinki's wasn't. Then things slowly fell apart and he was losing even his best friend to the same family that he was losing his dad.
I would love to see a part two to this. Just to see how things turn out in Kibum's life. How Taemin and his mother continue causing issues for this boy and mother. I NEED to know, lol. Does it get better for him? Does he let Jinki go and eventually get him back? Is Taemin going to eventually understand why Kibum doesn't like him? Will either family move? Ugh! There is so much that I need to know! My poor Kibum's childhood can't just end so roughly!

Chapter 1: I like the idea of childhood playmates!onkey and I thought that the playtime scenes were done really adorably well! But I wasn't expecting the twist about Kibum's dad to be involved with Taemin's mother >< However I did like the juxtaposition of the strong/weak mother role which Kibum was observing and basing himself on, as it was pretty intriguing on how it affected Kibum in his own relationship with Jinki. It was pretty heartbreaking to see Kibum's conflicting emotions with regards to his role model/mother and I guess the fact that what happened to his mother was kind of reflecting in the Kibum/Jinki/Taemin friendship, which was a good representation of the role model/reflection motif theme. Haha I can only hope that I didn't misinterpret some of the finer details in the fic! Thanks for writing this :)