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 a capri's thought
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Foreword

 

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thought
a capri's
hey, hi, yo or whatever. you can call me capri (no it's not my real name). I actually got Capri from my starsign - which is capricorn. besides, my real name starts with the letter c so you guys might as well just call me 'C' than capri. i have to say that i'm quite straightforward and quite harsh but i'll try to be as nice as i can. have a good day!
 
september 14, 2014 — this shop was created on leader zico's birthday!
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● SUBSCRIBING, AS WELL AS UPVOTING, IS OPTIONAL.

● please bear in mind that i do not review like the others. i simply state what i think - what you should or should not do, rather than correcting your grammar (If necessary) and vocabs. only request if you think you want what i think about your story.

● no, you may not ask for a re-do. what i think about your story is final.

● CREDIT THE SHOP IN YOUR FOREWORD. i DON'T NEED HUGE LETTERS IN BOLD COLORS. A SMALL THANK YOU AND MAYBE using the banner provided along with the link will do.

● do not bash me or anyone or you'll be banned.

● As of right now, i am only accepting one-shots and two-shots only.
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Q: What genre(s) of story do you accept?
» i accept any genres but mind you, i'm not a big fan of . i might actually skip the rated part.

Q: why do you not have any rubrics like other shops?
» honestly speaking, i'm not that good with english either. but i love reviewing and telling people what i think. the purpose of me creating this shop is not to correct your grammar and , but to let you know what i (or maybe others) truly think about what you've written. 
 
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creamcoloured-
#1
NAME: (OR WHAT YOU WANT TO BE CALLED) creamcoloured- / Nic
AGE: (I can't reveal but if it is for some stuff you may need to say, my personality is much older than my age so feel free to say anything.)
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/830766/
STORY TITLE: Seducing MrGay
SUMMARY: When a plan is set for Byun Hyeonri to seduce the class 'Gay', Zhang Yixing, she is dropped into a story filled with Betayal, Distrust and Scheming. Yeah, this is not a real-life Running Man peeps. First, Heartbreak, then Murder and most importantly... a marriage? Just a bet, ONE SINGLE BET caused her to be in deep danger. And not only her future, but her entire life.
IS ENGLISH YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?: yeah, sort of.
LENGTH: 14 chapters.
luqluq
#2
NAME: luqluq

AGE: seventeen

STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/883703/dying-embers-horror00angst

STORY TITLE: Dying Embers (horror + angst )

SUMMARY: My wife woke me up last night to tell me there was an intruder in our house. The last thing I saw was the alarm clock flashing 12.07 a.m. All I knew that she was murdered by an intruder two months ago.

IS ENGLISH YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?: No

LENGTH: one-shot (1,900 words)
WinterBlossom
#3
NAME: Winterblossom
AGE: 14
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/860607/shooting-star-angel-fantasy-romance-supernatural-kai-luhan
STORY TITLE: {별똥별} Shooting Star
SUMMARY: Elise is a human, her soul born of angel-fire, the glowing remnants of an angel who has spent her entire lifespan of a thousand years in the universe. Luhan is an angel, who lost his companion 18 years ago. Nothing escapes his eyes, for he was created by the Lord himself, blessed with the Gift of Memory and exceptional observance. Angels appear as shooting stars as they travel at high speeds, but even then, Luhan is able to see all that happens within his line of sight and remember it.

Luhan trembled, stopping in his line of flight. His wings beat, as fast as his pounding heartbeat, as his eyes widened in shock. Hadn't she ceased to exist 18 years ago? His partner, the beautiful Cassiopeia, stood in a garden, dressed in human's garb. But what made his fist clenched was the fact that her exquisite white feather wings were cut off. She faced him, lips parted and tears sparkling in her eyes, uttering "Save me". She sounded exactly the way Cassiopeia did. Only her voice was so filled with traces of hopelessness and desperation while his angel's was overflowing with joy.

Elise has cancer. Or leukemia, to be precise. She was diagnosed since 4, battling the disease for 14 years. People see her as a miracle, a symbol of hope for patients. But they expect her to die soon, anyway. She knows that she ought to feel blessed, but she feels that she is not living the life of a person. She is in a corner of the hospital's garden, a route that not many tread through. It feels as though this is her private space, a little secret that is satisfying to keep to herself. A shooting star crosses through the sky. Elise knows that it is silly to do so, but she clasps her hands together and makes a single wish.
IS ENGLISH YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?: Yes
LENGTH: Currently-8 chapters
KPOP_ILOVEYOU #4
Name: KPOP_ILOVEYOU
Age: 15
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/773650
Story title: When We Disbanded..
Summary: It has been 3 years since we've disbanded...
Is english your first language?: No
Length: 1494 words/ ONE SHOT
Queensabelle
#5
NAME: Queensabelle/Belle
AGE: 16
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/842429/unimpeachable-fugitive-crime-oneshot-romance-luhan-runaway-originalchacter
STORY TITLE: Unimpeachable Fugitive
SUMMARY:
18-year-old Jageun was a simple and an innoccent runaway girl.
Both her parents robbed banks for a living and whenever they succeeded,
they would always escaped from town to town.
Jageun was used to lying on her identity and she don't even remember her real name.
She couldn't make any friends because she don't attend schools like any other kids.
Lu Han was a charming young boy she happens to meet in a park.
What would happened, if he found out about Jageun's true self?
IS ENGLISH YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?: No
LENGTH: 2914 words (one-shot)
violetheart #6
Chapter 2: Violet here^^ finally "picking up" my review. I already credited the shop and the actual comment to the review is on a reply to this comment because it's pretty long. :)
Eunjibae
#7
NAME: aishwarya0906
AGE: 17
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/800297/she-brings-the-boys-out-infinite-exo-kai-luhan-eunji-chanyeol-got7
STORY TITLE: She brings the boys out
SUMMARY: Collection of one-shots/ stories (mostly romance) with exo, infinite, got7, btw, big bang etc.. and eunji
IS ENGLISH YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?: yes
LENGTH: 40 chapters but I'd liked for u to review from chapter10 onwards -thanks!
heyElio
#8
Hellloo, do you accept review request from stories that aren't completed yet? :)
nekotrina
#9
Chapter 1: Hello hello! Thanks so much! It helped me a lot. :) (Also, credited~)
I haven't used the AFF comment box very much, but I'll answer your questions in a reply to this comment :3 (BTW sorry it's so long omf)