The New Comer

The start of LOVE

August 4,2011 

*Janey and Uie are walking in the hall , and they here a shout down stairs* 

Uie:What's happening ??? here 

Girl:Don't you know the news the famous boy in Korea is coming here !!! OMG

Janey: You mean Youngmin and he's nerd cousin 

Girls:Yes!!!! Here they are 

*all stared at the car* 

Youngmin: We're here at Seoul International 

Minwoo: I will be bullied again 

Youngmin: well, You should be used to it . 

Minwoo * walked away with a sad face* 

Janey: Umm ..... Uie can I go to the classroom first ?? 

Uie: AA...sure .....(wondering) what happen to her ?? 

*Janey follow minwoo at the library*

Janey: Hello ..... your minwoo right ?? 

Minwoo:Yes,why ?? 

Janey: Your a new student but you doesn't seem Happy 

Minwoo:That's natural for me 

Janey: Owh!! I heard you are always bullied 

minwoo: Well It's true 

Janey: anyway Im janey Im 1st year  .........

minwoo:Ahh ok bye *walked away* 

*On the other hand* 

Girls:SHouting wohohohohohoho!!!

Youngmin: Hey ms.don't you like me ?? 

Uie:well'I dont like a boy like u yah! your rich but your not so Good 
so stay away from me 
*walked away* 

Youngmin: *laugh* This is a good start in this school *smiled* 

*It's lunch time and youngmin saw Uie  at the Hall walking* 

Youngmin: Hey! are you free today ?? 

Uie:Well,Im not Im busy 

Youngmin:well,It's sad to here...because I wanna know you more 

Uie: Just go to the school website and you'll know me *walked away* 

Youngmin: Hayz!!! why can't I get that girl !!! 

--Chapter4
I need a partner

 


 

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GPB_babyJaney
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The story is great... but chingu I think you should change the format of the story, you write it more on a script form which is sorta hard to understand (sorry)
i suggest you use the story form to make it longer and for it to be dramatized. I understand that you wrote this fic in a script version 'cause this is your first fic, well since we're actually the same age it's understandable (actually i used this script version one too) but still it will look much more interesting if you use the story format.

HWAITING ^_^