Loop.

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What is love again? 

 

Foreword

 

Random DBSK! AU.

A second look after Pine. and Catching Wind.

Past!Minsu, a little bit of Yunjae, Eunhae and.. Not decided yet.

PG-18 and above.

No proofreading.

Read at your own risk.

 

 

 

would be locked after a while.

I don't know how long it would be. hopefully not longer than Pine.

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N_chwa #1
Chapter 1: Hellooo~~~
Been reading your fic and thought that I will finally drop a comment here! XD
I love love love your fic. Thanks for inviting me to read it. ;)
Haha, I just came from reading Pine and for sure I thought that it has a happy ending....till I read the first chapter of Loop. ( my heart *sob*)
Ooohhh, hopefully this will have a happy ending...
After reading The Person You Love, I sincerely hope for Minsu couple to have a good ending. :')
forsvinner #2
Chapter 5: Had to re-read the last chapter because of how cute it was~ I'm glad to finally see them happy after all that struggle they went through. It was a happy ending after all lol

It was another great story to read and sorry for the late comment. Thought I had commented earlier :/ but as they say, better late than never.
sweet_apple5 #3
Chapter 5: ok, finally finished reading this...
first of all, im almost pulling out my hair because of their complicated relationship... i mean..
uuurrrghhh! how i wish i could just grab them and bang both heads onto each other!
omg.. the frustration reading this is soooooooo asfhlliutewxvnoppreqlmnb!!!

however... im glad at the end, they still try to give each other another chance~

nice story! thank u author-nim! <3
/leave cookies/
mun_min #4
So this is continuation of loop? Subscribe first then i'll read this tomorrow okay ;)
lavacake #5
i see past!minsu... uh oh..

thanks for the invite, i will read now :D
HELL_LIFE #6
Chapter 5: Author_nim thank you for the
invitation, sorry for the late comment.

i love the story soo much that i'm sure i will read it again..., i became emotional because minsu relationship in first i was soo sad but in the end i giggle like crazy because i'm soo happy.
author_nim thank you for this awesome story i enjoy soo much when i read it.
sweet_apple5 #7
omg~~ thank u for the invitation... i'll come back again after classes.. thank u so much.. love u!
/bribes with cheese cake/
fruitstea #8
Chapter 5: Thank you for the generous invitation. I feel sorry a bit for Yoochun and Lei. They seems more mature than Min and have good eyes which can find out Su's charm instantly. But I'm happy for this ending even if it is cliche. Min got several damages including 3 punches which hurt him physically and mentally, but he still challenged to get Su back. However, in 'Pine' I agree your comment as authur at the end of Chapter 4! By the way, does the word 'pine' mean to long for someone?
theoracle #9
Chapter 5: Happily ever after...
Hahaha...
Like u said..its AU cliche ending...
But.. I LIKE IT..^^

I like min character in this story
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Android-Genius #10
Chapter 5: Whew, right when I check back on this site I see you've been busy!
I just finished reading this fic and maybe since I'm dead tired right now some parts are a little blurry.
First of all...in the 1st chapter, Changmin really came off as a desperate clingy boyfriend (or was that just me? ;)). I totally felt for Junsu when he was put in that situation by Changmin...and you know thinking back on Catching Wind, I think it was more than just the moving in thing that pushed Junsu over the edge. I know that in the last chapter you explained Junsu's reasoning for everything and how he still felt like he was a burden to Changmin, but I also couldn't help but feel like the pressure Changmin put on him and his lack of understanding towards Junsu's feelings and mindset was as much a contributing factor...which you also touched on.
I gotta be honest with you, when you added potential love lines to Junsu and Changmin's lives, I was kinda, sorta, really hoping that they would move on (at least for Junsu...my bias is showing). I really liked Lei's personality as well as how well he assimilated himself into Junsu's life. Kibum's character felt a little forced, for me personally, but I understood his use within the story and so I give him a pass. Hana's role within this story was really sweet, and I liked how she cared for both Junsu and Changmin, though more overtly in regards to the former. Also, for the confrontation scene orchestrated by Eunhyuk, as a plot device I know it was necessary, but at a real life friendship level, I kinda disliked it (hated would be too harsh a word for you :)). For me personally, I take friendship seriously, and so to have a best friend pull a stunt like that is kinda hard to accept....regardless of the good intentions.
...I'll continue this comment since it's too long...
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