The Simple Things...

The Simple Things...
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Onew's POV:

 

"Jinki. Jinki, answer me please! Jinki!" I heard someone's voice faintly, calling my name incessantly. I stirred slightly and slowly opened my eyes, curious to know whose voice that was. It was a soft, beautiful boyish voice. Quite high pitched for a male voice, yet so husky and gentle. It sounded so familiar, yet I couldn't put my finger on it. It was pitch black around me. I was sure I had opened my eyes. Then why is it still so dark that I don't see anything?...

 

"Jinki!" again that same voice, uttering my name urgently. I turned my head around, trying to judge where the voice came from. Slowly, an image came into existence. A young man sitting alone crouched with his face hidden in his hands. Faint sobs emanating from him. I couldn't recognize him, but I somehow felt an urgent need to reach out to him and comfort him.

 

"Who are you?" I said and walked forward towards him. There was no reply from him. It was like he hadn't even heard me.

 

"Who are you? Why are you crying?" I raised my voice a little. He still continued sobbing, unaware of my existence even. I reached forward to him to try to shake him and let him know I was talking to him. But...I couldn't touch him. I tried so many times but, my hand just went through him. I looked at my hands, shocked. Why could I not touch him? I tried to grab him with both my hands this time, in vain. My hands just went through him again.

 

"Wha-what's this..." I didn't understand what was happening, and felt slightly panicky. The next thing I knew, I was in a dark place again. I saw a faint glow some way ahead of me. I started walking towards it. It kept moving away the more I walked towards it. I tried to look around to make out where I was. I could only see large dark trees everywhere. I wondered if I was in a forest of some kind. But, what was that white glowing light? I picked up my pace in hope to be able to get nearer to it. But, it moved farther away with every step I took towards it. 

 

Suddenly, I heard his tearful voice again. "Jinki..." This time his voice sounded weak. As if he was losing hope. I felt an urgency, an attraction towards this unknown person

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uoosemi
#1
Chapter 1: wow! THIS IS GREAT! I really lv your writing! this is awsome! I don't have words to describe! Oh!!!! Keep it up! If I had enough karma points! I'm really gonna upvote this! U deserve that! :)
Kiaaddict-
#2
I am not reading yet , but I already upvote hehehe I am not in reading mood. These comment below me , I am sure this story gonna be BOOM!! can't wait !
jjongshoe
#3
Chapter 1: gull no water you doing to my heart?
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Wolfram_iflameu #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god, this was absolutely beautiful. I was literally just shaking my head going nope nope nope in the beginning because I was so sure it was an out of body experience story, maybe like a haunting or something AND THEN THAT BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL ENDING GOD BLESS THIS STORY. And damn, the way you write oh my god, your beautiful beautiful writing style; I honestly can't deal with it. How do your words just flow out like that. It's like poetry, I swear it's like beautiful poetry I wish someone would read out to me. And your descriptions gaaaaah I'm going to spazz and get jealous at the same time because, dammit unnie, this is a piece of art I swear.

So im going to go sob and re-read this fic for about ten more times now because you're awesome, this story is awesome and it just makes me feel so sad and so happy at the same time. <333
jhengchie
#5
Chapter 1: This is nice.. ^^ i liked the flow of it
cute-little-oppas
#6
Chapter 1: Woah ♥○♥
I love your stories!! Like they are so different from the usual ones!!!
The plot and the idea was awesome!!
Loved it!!! You should write more Misa!!
fayrenz #7
Chapter 1: The beginning was so captivating !And the end...Jonghyun <3
I loved it through and through...it leaves behind a lot to think of, and that is what I truly like.
BlingBlingPanda
#8
Chapter 1: OMO....I soooo sooooo loved this <3 I subbed and upvoted because it deserves to ^^ *goes and read all the other OTP stories*