Chapter 1: ah, the idea is so cute. jonghyun got sick after the challenge and jinki tweeted with a hidden message for him. I thought it would come down to jonghyun apologizing and jinki letting him go easily but you make it go unpredictable.
your writing in the beginning of the story is good.
Chapter 1: Why you say you're sorry? Come on!, that was great!, I loved it :3 since it explain what really happened to Onew and Jjong because of that challenge(?) kkkkk~ thanks for sharing*-*
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