Detective Yung (One Shot Trial)

Description

I wrote this one shot to see what kind of interest the story would generate. I haven't decided if I would include like my other stories but this is simply to get feedback.

 

Please read and tell me what you think about the story. Comment what you enjoy about the story and what you think would help it improve. Thank you all and look forward to more stories in the future :)

Foreword

My other two oneshot trial stories. If you got time rank all three of them. If not then just tell me what you think about the one you find most interesting or the one you read :D Thanks!

 

The Gamer Ver. 1

The Gamer Ver. 2

 

Or you can go to my profile and just comment and vote for your favorite through the poll :D

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crossoverfanatic #1
Chapter 2: Seohyun's surname is not Kim. Her full actual name is Seo Juhyun.
y_poodle #2
Chapter 1: This seems interesting. Something different from the usual stories on AFF. Something I think I would enjoy yet give me heart attacks from the thrills
ktvftw #3
Chapter 1: Heyy! This is really interesting! I like the direction it's going in, with multiple cases to do as well as one grand one to solve (at the moment). I really hope that there are lots of unexpected turns and twists throughout the story, and I'm looking forward to what comes next :)
FallenSOne_ #4
Cool story with a nice plot, nice to know that jessica wasnt being cold but instead observing her surroundings :P anyways just my suggestion, isnt it abit to chunky? Maybe a little more spacing would help? But hey its just my suggestion :) hope to see you include a or a great twist :) keep up the good work :D
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