Chapter 1: I hope you can edit your story and put in punctuation, to make it easier for readers to read. It's difficult to read without punctuation. Thank you.

Chapter 2: I am sorry, but I have same opinion with the other. Not this story not interesting, but it more to how you write it. Like other said, you can put such ",' or other sign to mkae the coversation more alive.

Hope you will edite your writing in next chap.
Thank you.

Chapter 1: your story it's really interesting but I can't finished the story because it's a little bit confused. you didn't use the simbol such as ("...") or (,) or (.)
I thought @indiradomen suggest is good, and it'll be nice if you can edit your story.
I hope you will edit the story, so I can finishing the story :))

Chapter 1: Excuse me, would you mind to write this story like this style:
"I love you hyun.."
"I love you too, yong.." replied seohyun.
Can you? Because i'm confused with your story. But i like your story authornim. Thanks for the update authornim

Chapter 2: Excuse me, would you mind to write this story like this style:
"I love you hyun.."
"I love you too, yong.." replied seohyun.
Can you? Because i'm confused with uour story. But i like your story authornim. Thanks for the update authornim

Chapter 1: Yongwha? It shud be yonghwa rite ..

Chapter 2: can u organize it more? Like putting what they said like that : " i love u" yonghwa said , " i love u more" Seohyun replied.

Chapter 2: can u organize it more? Like putting what they said like that : " i love u" yonghwa said , " i love u more" Seohyun replied.

Sorry sorry so much the 1st chapter was wrong it was suppose to be the 2nd chapter MY BAD:((((((

Update soon