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When Baekho's one time best friend Minhyun goes missing, everyone thinks it's just a rebellious teen act. Everyone, that is, except Baekho. He's determined to find Minhyun, following the twisting maze of danger into something he's not entirely ready for.

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Thanks so much to Vonnie at the amazing Coup D' Graphics for the poster and background <3

Reviewed by Selenophile Review Shop

-Tigress-
No one?? I didn't think that the first chappie was THAT bad. T.T

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Wasurenagusa #1
Chapter 1: I just wanted to say how good this storyline is and the topic you choose. The characters are so real and so are their actions. This was such an enjoyable read. It stays one of my favourites on AFF.
Fan_of_Karma
#2
Chapter 3: I really loved how you ended it! I'm usually not a fan of stories that involve drugs, but this was actually really good! Gotta love baekren in this :3
AnjuHimeChan
#3
Chapter 3: Drugs are never an easy topic.. i'm glad ren could change himself and that baekho rescued his best friend. Thankfully there were no consequences (aron or jr could easily make his life a hell). theflow of this story was very nice, i enjoyed reading it!
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 3: Wow!!! JR's an ...I wanted to punch him myself! I loved the end of this. It was very real and a good story<3.
reyaakoh
#5
Chapter 3: this a nice story. ^___^ dark a bit but yeah nice still! thumbs up for you
Major14000 #6
Chapter 3: that was so awesome!!
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#7
Chapter 3: *sobs* that was kind of a scary situation in JR's place. I actually anticipated a last minute attack like BH did, but ugh I'm glad they got out T^T
And MinRen healing, gotta loved that *cries*
JonetsuDN
#8
Chapter 3: *whines* I kept on wishing for some make-up at the end. HOWEVER! Still a great story. Thank you authornim~~
Amalya
#9
Chapter 3: Oh my goodness! All the feels for this chapter! XD *runs around in spastic circles* Maybe I've just been emotional lately (which I have) but dammit if this one didn't get me choked up a couple times.

I definitely love the themes you've got going on in it. Friendship ties, loyalty, determination (Baekho's grit and gumption are just fantastic), as well as hints of redemption in the works and just all the things. lol I'll add the mention of a couple typos now but otherwise, it was a good resolution.

Bless Ren for going along because Baekho never could have done that alone. At least not without a lot more trouble. I will say that him as a badass is pretty freaking awesome though! lol The fight scene was well coordinated and easy to picture. It was also something that had me sitting on the edge of my seat since I wasn't sure how it was going to end. haha A lot of things could have happened but that was a neat little twist with JR and actually keeping his word. I'd say honor amongst thieves though I don't think it quite fits but apparently he's not totally a degenerate.

The descriptions leading up to the confrontation were especially poignant in showing their exhaustion and reminding us just how much/how little time had passed but also how much they'd gone through already up to that point. Baekho's mental commentary too when he was thinking about his parents (and dead father) was particularly interesting. I find it ironic how he was worrying so much about Minhyun's mom but the thought never occurred to him that it could just as easily be his mother in that situation. Especially if he failed. Then again, maybe not thinking about it helped make it less possible. *shrug* (cont...)
DGNA_Forever
#10
I LOVE the poster! It's beautiful<3.