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The lantern's blood will shine in the darkest night.
 
Choi Taejun
 
ABility. Time Control
FACE CLAIM. Song Chanho
backup FACE CLAIM. Lee Chihoon
applicant. Yoonon
date submitted. 08/01/2014
status. ACCepted

Okay, hello! Thank you for applying! So here are the reviews. Fistly, you stated that he was born in 1998 but then in the personality section you said he's 24 years old. Shouldn't he be 16? Did you write it wrong or... 

His ethnicity is Korean-Japanese. Does that mean that he has a Korean father and a Japanese mother? I understand that he was brought up in Japan but if his parents are both Korean that make his ethnicity fully Korean. His nationality would change if he and his mother hold a citizenship or live there for more then 10 years but his ethnicity would still be 100% Korean.

Next, you said that a representative from SM came to scout Taejun but then you wrote 'The YG man', is it also a mistake? If it isn't can you please explain how he become a trainee in YG if he was scouted by SM? 

One more thing, please state his stagename, position and fanclub information. I know it wasn't there at first but it was my mistake. So if you can kindly forgive me...

Other then that, there's nothing wrong. I understand his personality and his ability. I must say, he's a pretty sweet child.

Please correct the following and comment below once you're done, thank you 

Choi Minhyuk
 
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Ability. Invisibility
FACE CLAIM. Kang Hyukmin
backup FACE CLAIM. Kim Dongwook
applicant. pandaeyes7000
date submitted. 08/02/2014
status. Accepted

Hey! Thanks for applying! Now on to your reviews;

I don't think there's any major flaw in Minhyuk, in fact I found him rather adorabs. I just want to squeeze him. But there's one thing though, you said that he was apart of a small hip hop group for 8 months. Can you talk more about them? Can you describe them, like the connection between the members or where they are now?

Other then that, it's all fine! Please add the following and comment once your done! Thank you~ 

Damien Kang
 
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Ability. Glaciokinesis
FACE CLAIM. Shin gwangchul
backup FACE CLAIM. Park sangil
applicant. italian-ice
date submitted. 08/03/2014
status. Accepted

Hey! Thanks for applying! Now on to your reviews;

Damien is a cute character and the fact that he's a closet otaku is just... can we be friend? I see nothing majorly wrong in your application but can you provide the name of your face claims because as much as I think he's cute, I don't know him. Oh, and sorry for the late review since I've been pretty busy lately. Please add the following and comment once your done! Thank you~ 

Hwang Shen Long
 
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Ability. Force field sheild
FACE CLAIM. hwang jin uk
backup FACE CLAIM. won jongjin
applicant. makemylifecolourful
date submitted. 07/31/2014
status. accepted

Hey there! Thanks for applying! Your application is flawless. I'm not sure if it's because of your descriptive writing style or just your lovely character. The fact that he's not good in dancing is just precious. I just want to claim him as mine. hahaha, just kidding but I seriously like the application, I think all application should be like this.

Once again, many thanks for applying and good luck!  

Li Xunjin
 
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Ability. empTHY
FACE CLAIM. GO SANGGIL
backup FACE CLAIM. KWAK MINJUN
applicant. LJOECUTIE001
date submitted. 08/06/2014
status. ACCEPTED

Hey! Thanks for applying! Now on to your reviews;

I didn't see anything wrong in your application but it would be better if you would note his habits in his personality section. That's all I can say since your character is a very well rounded character.
Please add the following and comment once your done! Thank you~ 

Kim Seungjin
 
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Ability. Mediumship
FACE CLAIM. Kim gum
backup FACE CLAIM. shim donghyun
applicant. ljoe_jjang
date submitted. 08/15/14
status. accepted

Hey there, thnak you for applying! 

Firstly, I want to ask why his nickname is M-hyung/oppa. M stands for mute, I know, but why does he have that nickname? Who call him that? His friends? His fans? 

Secondly, is the Jinwoo in your background Winner's Jinwoo? 

Lastly, can you please note down his trivia and habits in his personality section? I don't know if you missed it or something, but it's a very important thing.

Please add the following and comment once your done! Thank you~ 

Reminder: Please fix your app after reading your review and comment on the comment section below once you finish! Thank you.
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ljoe_jjang
#1
Chapter 2: i edited my app ,Jinwoo is OC should i change his name?
ljoecutie001 #2
Chapter 2: i added four habits in the personality section ,do i have to add more?
suiceon
#3
Chapter 2: added the ulzzang names! c:
PandaEyes7000 #4
Chapter 2: i added a small description of them in the background, they still contact with each other.
MakeMyLifeColourful
#5
Chapter 2: Omg I'm so glad you like Yong! Thank you^^
MakeMyLifeColourful
#6
Chapter 1: By psychic ability you mean..? Sorry I'm a bit stupid xD
MingyuCarat
#7
Chapter 2: did as you told me... + i gave some travia XD
SoNyuh0016
#8
applying for this!
heebumdae
#9
definitely gonna apply <3