Chapter 1: A really nice story. I liked the fact that it was different from the usual spartace stories. I know it is marked complete, but I hope you will either continue or write another story.
Chapter 1: I liked how you painted Jong Kook and Gary as close brothers, and how they were all feeling the same emotions. :3 And also how you described Ji Hyo as both powerful and weak - the clumsiness is a nice touch to her character. The ending was really good.
Is this a one-shot? I think it is a really nice chapter that can stand alone.
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