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user - love interest - love rival - rival - plotline - status

 

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TIFFANY KWON AE YOUNG

 

dazzlingrose - luhan - mark - soon hee - the first love - chosen

 

yuko's review - hello! ♡ this is my character, tiffany. so she's basically a-ual, but then there's luhan who changes everything. cheers. o u o v

 

re's review - heyo my lovelies! meet tiffany, the person everyone tends to fall in love with. ☾

JANELLE LEE JI YOUNG

 

iceflowerre - kai - zico - n/a - the money craze - chosen

 

yuko's review - meet janelle, our rich kid. hoho. ♡

 

re's review - heyo my lovelies! meet janelle, mah lovely rich kid! enjoy her while you can :p ☾

MOON AKIRA

 

mitsukixiumin - l - n/a - naeun - the writer - accepted

 

yuko's review - hello, yui! ♡ sorry for the late review. i was really busy ;; anyways, let's get to the point, akira is so cute! she's really inoccent tbvh. gosh i really like how you wrote akira's personality, especially that dream part cx i can definitely relate and it :/ i also find it cute that her mom mispronounced her name. o u o lolwhydoifindeverythingcute? i also really like the fact that you chose her own cousin as her rival. really interesting. and and i love you, too. o u o /bricked. btw, i have a few questions, so myungsoo and naeun are close? and how do you want myungsoo to react when he discovers akira's poems? now let's move to your mistakes. you should be having a back-up rival just in case naeun is taken by someone else. also, i think that akira is too underweight ;; just fix those and you're good to go! good luck!

 

re's review - heyo lovely yui! sorry for the SUPER late review, my life o u o. alrightly then, firstly i love the name akira, so pretty. akira is so pretty, i like her^^. her mother mispronounced her name, hehe. yes, i did see the same mistakes. just fix them and you're good to go! 

KWON KyunG MI

 

hellokitty10755 - kiseop - jin young - n/a - the writer - accepted

 

yuko's review - hello, cortney! ♡ first of all, sorry for the late review. i was really busy. anyways, thank you for applying. young mi is a really great character. and how she met kiseop is just so cute ;; i can imagine that scene already ;u; i don't have much to say, your application is plain perfect. oh and yes, i am planning to write the story using the girls' and the boys' point of view. good luck! ♡

 

re's review - hello, lovely cortney! ☾late review again, thanks for applying we appreciate it. the way kyung mi and ki seop met, /heartsinmyeyes/. the writer, it's so popular. she seems to have a really deep passion for writing, just wow. i didn't really see any mistakes, f-l-a-w-l-e-s-s.

HAN MIN RAN

 

liltaytay45 - suho - taecyeon - yoona - the writer - mistakes

 

yuko's review - hello, tay! ♡ sorry for the late review. i was really busy. anyways, i really like min ran. i think that she really suits the plot. i really like her story with taecyeon. i can't believe i never thought of that. lol. there's nothing much i have to say, your applicant is really good. o u o but there's some mistakes i found. i think that min ran is too short. and for the personality and background, i said minimum 2 paragraphs but you only wrote one in both. just fix your mistakes and you're good to go! so i reviewed yor fixed application but your height is still the same and also the personality is still in one paragraphs. make sure to fix it o u o good luck!♡

 

re's review - heyo lovely tay! ☾min ran, such a cute name like

AVA ROSE NAM AE SOOK

 

jongdaesgirl - kris - min ho - nana - the writer - mistakes

 

yuko's review - hello, melody! ♡ sorry for the late review. i was really busy. anyways, when i read ava rose's traits, i was suprised. all the applicants we received that applied for the writer plot are all quiet and shy, but yours is different, and i really like it. i don't think i should say much, your application is really, really good o u o v but there's some mistakes in your application. her height, you wrote 5'7 and 187cm, but if it's 5'7, isn't it supposed to be 170cm? and we already said it in the rules that your love interest and rival must me between 16 to 18. just fix that and you're good to go! so i've reviewed your fixed application, but nana's age is still 22. make sure to fix that. cx ♡

 

re's review - hello lovely melody! ☾ her name all together, so pretty i mean just say it out loud "ava rose nam ae sook". her personality traits, so different from everyone else. your application was really, really good. firstly though for her mistakes, her height is 187cm and you put 5'7, it would be 170cm. kris is a good choice for a love interest, but his age has to be changed. other than that you're good to go! ☾

LEE YOUNG MI

 

thalieeeeee - sehun - v - yoona - the writer - accepted

 

yuko's review - hello, thalie! ♡ sorry for the late review. i was really busy. your application is short but well-detailed, especially your personality, background, likes, dislikes, etc. /thumbs up. but unfortunately, there's some mistakes. if young mi is the writer, she should be really diligent, not lazy. oh and can you add a bit more detail on how you met your sehun, v and yoona? did you bump into them? put into a group? just fix that and you're good to go! good luck! ♡

 

re's review - heyo lovely thalie! ☾SUPER late review, sorry for that. been busier than ever. so short but detailed, /thumbs up/. exo seems to be a very popular love interest choice, know i see why others say something like /no exo/. euuu it's ok, we don't mind. can you add a little more detail on the three /sehun, v, & yoona/ and how you met them. we can't do much if you just write /school/, other than that you're good! just fix your mistakes. ☾ 

LEE CHUNG AE

 

liltaytay45 - baekhyun - nickhun - taeyeon - the long distance - accepted

 

yuko's review - hello, tay! ♡ thank you for applying for the second time cx your application is really good, it really fits the plotline. and i like how you start your background with a "hey" lol. anyways, i found some mistakes in your application, you didn't fill up the name and the nickname. and you should be having a back-up rival just in case taeyeon is taken by someone else. also, i think you haven't finish answering one of the questions at the question time section cx also your password, your love interest is baekhyun but you hyperlinked it to suho. just fix those and you're good to go! good luck! ♡

 

re's review - heyo, tay! sorry for the SUPER late review...again. busier that ever for me. anyways, i found nothing wrong with you application since yuko covered them already. hehe, good luck?

 

AHN KYU JUNG

 

kidzee- - namjoon - daehyun - n/a - the geek - accepted

 

yuko's review - hello, zee! ♡ woah. that's a really long application you have there. i really enjoyed reading it. kj is a unique character and she fits the plot perfectly. there's nothing much i need to say, your application is plain perfect. good luck! ♡ 

 

re's review - heyo, zee! what a long application, like wooo /wipes sweat/. anywho, i really did like you application. nice, long and detailed. perfect for us to write about her, i found nothing wrong with her application. good luck!

 

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kidzee-
#1
Chapter 3: Thanks for accepting me! I'm glad you like my character <3
liltaytay45
#2
Chapter 3: Okay I finally got it haha. Thank you for having me make another app
MitsukiXiumin
#3
Chapter 3: the writer so famous and reading your review about hellokitty10755's app make me feel like I'm already defeated.oh no, I've to sent another app in case Akira didn't get choose .
Thalieeeeee #4
Chapter 3: I've edited! I've also edited the reason of rivalry. Tell me there's something wrong!
Golden-Blood
#5
Chapter 3: I fixed it up.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/906183
Is it okay if I do another app for another slot since everyone's applying for writer?
Or is it a no? Just curious ~
liltaytay45
#6
Chapter 3: I fixed my mistakes and I also added something to the "Suggestion"
liltaytay45
#7
Chapter 3: Hey is it okay if i make another app? for my backup, cause theres alot of writers haha
wonpokemon
#8
Chapter 3: wow. the writer is popular. o.o
i guess i may still apply or not. lol
SugoiNagashiSakura
#9
HI IM APPLYING FOR THIS. :D
-bitnaneun
#10
Chapter 2: and why is it that we can't choose our face claims? if thw face claims are already set, what is the purpose of having a back up? Pljlflakdkakdka sorry if I'm asking too many questions LOL I'm just a little confused by how things work for this