1. Caged Bird ; HaeHyuk ; Angst

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Caged bird.

                HaeHyuk ; angst / highschool!au / implied! / violence scenes ; PG ; no happy ending / character death ; the very first dark theme I’ve ever written so far ;n; ; - you have been warned.

“Jesus ing Christ! What happened to you, Lee Hyukjae?!”

Hyukjae smile lightly and shrug it off, “I’m fine, Sungmin-Hyung, I’m still breathing like you all do.”

“I’m not asking you whether you stop breathing or not, I asked you about those bruises! That person did that again, didn’t he?”

Hyukjae might be clever to keep his straight face, but Sungmin is pretty much observant, the way Hyukjae’s body gone rigid and a scared expression that lies beneath his eyes, just because Sungmin implied who did that to him. Shrugging his shoulder off, Hyukjae started to walk a little bit faster away from Sungmin.

Sungmin sigh dejectedly while looking at Hyukjae’s back keep going further and further, “I’m so sorry you have to meet that Lee Donghae, Hyukkie…”

It happened a couple years back then. When Hyukjae just a freshman on his university and this Lee Donghae was his senior. They met by accident, some can say, they fall in love instantly right then and there, and just like what the rest of people done, they went out.

However they relationship didn’t stay like what other people do.

Their relationship is full of love and passion, yes, but it full of obsession and possessiveness as well. Things gone messy once Donghae caught Hyukjae did an assignment, with his friend in classroom, all alone. It snapped the possessiveness nature in Donghae’s heart. At first, Hyukjae accepted it and admitted it was his fault for not telling Donghae at all, and Hyukjae kind of like the jealous!Hae at that moment.

Yep, at that moment.

After that incident, Donghae becomes more and more aggressive with him. It didn’t take long before they make love session changed into claim Donghae’s property session. It didn’t take long before the used-to-be gentle hand switched into something dreadful that always hit him. It didn’t take long before the all blooming loves turned into a decaying love.

Some of Hyukjae’s friends had persuaded the said guy to leave Donghae behind, because he gained nothing from their oh-so-called relationship. But Hyukjae can’t, he simply can’t leave Donghae. Because he’s the one who heard Donghae’s cry everytime the latter had done something unforgivable, because he’s the o

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koelynm
#1
Chapter 5: Oh... That was a pretty intense ride! I didn't enjoy the first story that much because.. I'll be honest with you - I just don't like when either of eunhae is a bad guy, like really bad psycho who kills his loved one, so.. Interesting but not my cup of tea. Though! I have to give you credits for writhing this piece so comprehensively - short but very skilful writing, you explained Hyukjae's reasons very cleverly with little wording but a lot of content. Good job with it. Also, pretty realistic stuff about how person in an abusive relationship thinks, how abusive relationship works. And points for not being afraid of topics like this.
The second story I read briefly, and again I'm sorry but I couldn't understand a word from their dialogues! Haha I'm not native in English, so little meaning for me, and also.. kid fics are another not cup of tea of mine. In reality, I skipped it first time and went straight to the third story (but went back after the sadness to find some comfort in fluffy kid fic hahhhhhhhhhh)
The third story is really good. I'm a er for romance, I'm not even ashamed of it one bit, I love happy endings. But the story is really well written and gosh.. Again, short but I like how briefly yet thoughtfully you described their whole relationship. How they started form real friendship but ended up in a broken tragedy. I ABSOLUTELY ADORE how you went through the dialogue with Donghae's internal conflict, how he was thinking opposite things he said, it was so vivid, so easy to imagine - great job.
[tbc]
SilverBlueJewel
#2
Chapter 1: Hyukkie T_T
Till his last breath, he still love Donghae even it is Donghae who took his life away.
MyeolchiHyuk #3
Chapter 5: Ohmo.. poor hae..hyuk is such a bastard.. how can he just played with hae...

Thanks for the update..
connieis1
#4
Chapter 5: I am so sad my heart hurts for hae, but for hyukkie I want to slap him for doing this to hae.
cj041586
#5
Chapter 5: WOW so heartbreaking :( Thanks for the update :)
MyeolchiHyuk #6
Chapter 3: awww.. they are sooo cute and adorable...

^.^
guihyuk
#7
Chapter 1: omfg.... i-

poor hyukjae omg why donghae so cruel :(((((
cj041586
#8
Chapter 3: These two are adorable :)
connieis1
#9
Chapter 1: How sad to see that hyukkie is in a bad relationship,....bless his lil heart.
cj041586
#10
Chapter 1: This is so sad but he still loved him til the end :(