i'm glad that you're still writing this story because the plot is just amazing. i probably still read it even if i didn't get choose and would try to comment too.
the story could start perhaps with a blackmail. someone who always sending them text about how she/he knows their secret. the girls didn't care until something really happen - box of old pictures or something that the girls try to buries down with them.
you've mention that the girs are having their comeback so maybe they were trying to sabotaged their rivals by giving rumour tips to journalist or something. their plan worked and they won lots of awards but they soon got blackmail from an anoynomous.
love the revamp! so glad you decided not to abandon this story
i srsly love the idea so much;;;; i'd prob still be reading even if i don't get chosen.
for the first chapter, i think it'd be best to lay out the group's best moments
when they were at their peak. and then go into the members' problems
but not make it too obvious but lay out the suspense and tension between them
idk lol hope i helped a bit? can't wait for updates & take care of yourself <3
Chapter 4: sorry for not commenting earlier/
i'm busy doing stuffs and haven't
checked the story until just now
the layout is perfect
and krystal's picture really fits the
layout like agdasjkd
for the actual small details of a
chapter
i'm not sure if i can actually help
you with this like coming up with
ideas bc everyone knows how
non-creative i am weeps
but i guess you might want to put
some flashbacks or throwbacks
during the early debut days of the
girls?
and well here's a really personal
preferred suggestion
that is use korean blogs or simply
kpop fanblogs to reveal members
or idk members profiles
oh and i just thought of this
why not start the story with girls'
quarrels
okay tbh i'm running out of
ideas
i don't even know if i'm on the
right track lmao
i'm not sure if this helps like
bleh sorry
taken aback by the layout changes
wow this layout is amazing
and krystal is so pretty so that's even better
because i don't know what this story is about
i think its harder for me to come up with any suitable ideas
but i think that you can utilize allkpop as a way to
communicate stuff across that is otherwise a lot tougher
to tackle as a story. i think that dandelions- made use of
something like this, as well when it came to the scandals.
i don't think i commented on the teasers but i think it came
off as something that might come from korean horror movies
and i think that if you are having a block, whispering corridors
might be something interesting to watch to get some ideas rolling
suffering and pain/injustice (is a more ambiguous idea) but these few
themes seem to be quite common in your teasers so hell girl might be
a good watch. season 1 is a little softer, with a clear boundary between perpetrators and victims
so i think season 2 and the first half of season 3 is good for ideas like these.
hopefully, this will make up for the lack of comments. i am genuinely interested
in how this apply will turn out. i might not be able to comment often due to my irl responsibilities
but your teasers and your current updates really took my breath away
so yes, looking forward to your updates
((i'm also surprised that no one took the time to write something lengthy to you especially since
your concept was so fresh. but i hope that this made your day))
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