After Rain

Description

Jung Taekwoon was expecting some time alone with a cup of coffee right after it rained. 

 

But it seems someone wanted to join him.

Foreword

So I critiqued the story and changed a couple things. Nothing major change just a few words. 

 

Uhm, I got to submit this story into a contest and i'm waiting for the results. That's kinda why I actually went to critique it. 

But I'm glad I did so hopefully I get my results back and maybe some criticizm to help improve my writing for many more stories to come. 

Thank you~

 

Dislcaimer

Yeah yeah no plagiarism. Wanna take the story and share it? Sure go ahead, just credit the thing. Uhm.......if it's similiar to any other story I'm sorry, I just thought of this randomly like 10 minutes ago so yeah. Thank thank~

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cha_innie #1
Chapter 1: Yuy, soooooo cute!
fanblob #2
Chapter 1: this is so cute im dkjhjshflaksjfsd ;A;
Choiyoona #3
Omg I love this! Please write more~!!!!
nuestismyidol101 #4
Chapter 1: //sCREAMS//BAE ITS SO CUTE

Hi it's Ri yes this is my account^^
KiwiPrincess #5
Chapter 1: so fluffy.. like it.. ^^
weerainbow #6
Chapter 1: Aww such fluffy happy Neo! This is really lovely. I particularly like how you expressed their different characters and how they're quite different but they found a middle ground of comfort in each other. I'm sleepy so not sure I explained that well but it was really tender and loving and feels just like that warm hug they shared under the blanket.
Angelnspirit #7
Chapter 1: It's niceeee I like it ^^
Vihanna96 #8
Chapter 1: OMG cute~ <33
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