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We are patient. We will take time digging deep at "cliche" stories. We will break down the grammatical barrier and analyze your plot and characters in details. 

We regard reviewers as important jobs. Our job is not to bash or to praise. Our job is to advise and to encourage.

We hold fanfics as formal literature. We are willing to help fanfic writers to create successful pieces of literature that make you proud.

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azure_bliss #1
+ Story Title: Reminiscing Rose
+ Link to the story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/754395/reminiscing-rose-angst-bts-bangtan-jungkook
+ Are points applicable?: No, but may I request a simple grade without points?
+ Note to the reviewer: The plot is extremely cliche. I focused more on the characters so I'd like to know if they are relatable and life-like. Also, I'd like to know your thoughts, as a reader on the ending.

Thank you in advanced!
yuu_sama #2
Chapter 10: Hi, dear, Reviewer-nim.
Thank you so much for working hard on reviewing my story. I know it might be a hard task for you, since my story is just as weird as me, hahaha ^^ But wow, I'm so amazed by how detail you are, and that's why I need to say thank you again. What you have said is really motivating! Thank you! And you're right, I should learn English and read more to enrich my vocabularies and fix my grammar. Hahaha, I'm so ashamed, but thank you for pointing out everything I need to develop! I think I can't stop thanking you, and yeah... for the last time, thank you.
I'll credit your shop soon~ ^^ Have a nice day, Reviewer-nim. God bless you~ <3
pinkad #3
Mind to be affies? \^o^/

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https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/784003/
RedGuitarist #4
Chapter 8: Thank you for the review :) I'll be PM-ing the reviewer to clarify some things since I'll probably go over the character count limit so I wouldn't want to flood the comment section. Will be sure to credit real soon :) I hope you don't mind if I were to put up the review in the thread I made for the reviews I've received for Being Afflicted :)
pandoralacey #5
Chapter 6: Thank you so much for the reviews. I'll change what is already pointed out by you. I'm really happy that you can relate to my characters well, it shows that I'm indeed on the right track. I'll credit right away. Thanks again.
JESLEN #6
Chapter 5: Hello. First let me say thank you for this very detailed review. It helped me a lot and it shows that I still have a lot to improve.
I understand what you are trying to say about the title. But I believed that adding an adjective to the term Gisaeng will reveal too much of what I had in mind. Gisaengs are often 'connoted' with different terms such as entertainer, artist, and even sometimes es. I wanted my readers to have that impression so that when I finally reveal her "real" self, there will be some kind of shocking factor. And no, I am not just talking about her status as a gisaeng. That is already a given conflict. That is not the major conflict later on in the story. And yup, I agree that the romance part is quick because i have a plan in building a solid and seemingly carefree romance so that when conflicts will arise (and no, I am not talking about her status as a gisaeng), they will be torn between love and loyalty. About Maru, the term is not greedy with power actually and it has nothing to do with jealousy. But I will not reveal the cause of his obvious dislike. Hehe. And thank you for pointing about the dialogues. I wanted reviewers to point out if the way my characters converse are somewhat modern. I'll go and try to edit. Thank you for pointing that out. About the slave's status, that will be revealed later on. Well, actually the story doesnt only revolve around the conflict of her status as a gisaeng. The "forbidden romance" that was mentioned in my description is not because of that. But I will not do some spoilers in this comment.

Thank you so very much for this detailed and satisfying review. I'm glad you had able to point out all of the plot holes. I'm glad that you opened the shop this early (when my story is still starting). At least, I have a guide in how I write the future chapters. I'll go now and credit.

By the way, good review. I'll definitely be back once again ^^
myheartswishes #7
+ Story Title: Runes of Despair
+ Link to the story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/701077/runes-of-despair-action-exo-exok-exom-mark
+ Are points applicable?: Yes
+ Note to the reviewer: Please be very detailed ^^ Especially about characterisation, description of events, setting and emotions, flow, language use etc ^^
yuu_sama #8
Chapter 3: Username: yuu_sama

+ Story Title: SCHOOLSTER HEARTBLEMAKERS

+ Link to the story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/735861/schoolster-heartblemakers-comedy-drama-friendship-romance-zico-originalcharacter-bts

+ Are points applicable?: No.

+ Note to the reviewer: I don't need to say anything, reviewer-nim. I trust you and your judgment. I believe that you'll put your best in reviewing my story, so just do it your way. I'll follow you.

Thank you so much for this chance! <3 HWAITING~!!!
pandoralacey #9
Greetings,
Username : pandoralacey
Story Title : My Name Is Her
Link to the story : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/765307/my-name-is-her-moonchaewon-moongeunyoung-psychological-sliceoflife-kriswuyifan
Are points applicable : No please
Note to the reviewer : Please comments more in grammar aspect and the sentence's structure. Thanks in advance.
RedGuitarist #10
Username: RedGuitarist
+ Story Title: Being Afflicted
+ Link to the story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/742847/
+ Are points applicable?: Yes :)
+ Note to the reviewer: I only have a few chapters up but I would like to know your opinion of its progress so far. Please do focus on the flow of the story as well as the character's development :) Thank you!
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