Chapter 4: Hey please can you edit the parts that have Japanese words written in English, it kinda makes no sense in a story with Chinese and Korean characters and makes the story look very misinformed
Chapter 13: I read, bookmarked, and subscribed to this story and have been searching for it for so long lol. This is top 5 ofor my Taohun obsession. I instantly became a Tao girl after watching Showtime last year (just discovered EXO last year). I feel you got his personality down so good and Sehun was being a little by lowkey torturing my Taozi lol. Thank you and I know I'll read this again.
Chapter 13: omg did i seriously never comment on this chapter? first off, this has to be one of the best written taohun fics i've ever read, and the character development in Sehun was just fantastic throughout the entire fic, and it was an interesting plot (esp. bc it was predebut!!), and idk where i'm going with this comment, but just know that you did a great job with this fic!! *hopes you continue to write taohun*
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