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I would like to thank everyone once more for their participation and sharing their wonderful stories with me. I didn't want to have to put a score on them, but it had to be done in order to figure out who the two winners are.

Congratulations to DearDaisy for monster (FIRST) and quagmireisadora for Come, Sleep (SECOND) for winning this competition! Please PM me and I can send you your prizes to you.

 

The following are how I awarded the points for each entry. If there are any questions, please don't hesitate to ask.

Thank you, once again!

xoxo

, whattodoaboutonew

 

 

Story Relevance (/2) Themes (/5) Writing proficiency (/5) Style (/5) Writing mechanics (/5) Characterisation (/5) Storytelling (/5) Completed? (/1) Potential? (/1) TOTAL
Between You and Me 0 0 5 3.5 5 3 2 1 0 19.5
Blind 2 4 2 3 3 3.5 4 0 1 22.5
Come, Sleep 2 2 5 4 5 4 3.5 0 1 26.5
Day a Day 2 3 3 3 3 3 3 1 0 21
Jaws 2 3 5 3.5 4 3.5 3 1 0 25
Monster 2 5 4 5 5 4 5 1 0 31
The Destruction of Kim Kibum 2 3 5 5 4 3 2 0 1 25
  • Relevance: Was there a 'dark' character?
  • Themes: Was there a theme or topic of discussion and was it interesting?
  • Writing proficiency: Grammar, spelling, English proficiency
  • Style: Were the writing style, narrative tone and voice engaging?
  • Writing mechanics: Was the detail of description and other elements effective in the story telling, in building the atmosphere, character, worldscape?
  • Characterisation: Were the characters recognisable and engaging?
  • Storytelling: Was the plot suitable and engaging, and the writer's decisions effective in making me interested?
  • Bonus points: Completed or incomplete and with potential?

 

 

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[DARK CONTEST] Sort of advertising that I have read all stories and will endeavour to post results this weekend. Thank you for your stories!

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DearDaisy #1
Chapter 13: *sobbing* WHY DID I NOT CHECK THIS ACCOUNT BEFORE NOW *more sobs* I'm so happy! I'm glad you liked that piece!
zero4life
#2
Chapter 13: third as far as i can see. Not bad. Though English isn't my first language and i started off a bit late so it wasn't finished. I could have scored higher... But i'm very satisfied with this. Thanks for letting me participate. I'll be sure to finish my fiction though. ;)
wordsareheavy #3
Chapter 3: Did it end? \O/
bangles25
#4
Chapter 10: >.< ah
zero4life
#5
Chapter 6: Okay i started posting. http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/956634/
zero4life
#6
Chapter 10: T_T i really wanted to compete. and i wrote the first chapter when i found out the deadline is in two/three days. I know i can't finish my story before that time. It's impossible for me with the idea that i had. T_T is that bad? can i still compete even though my story isn't finished?
DearDaisy #7
I finished posting my entry! All the parts are up. :)
wordsareheavy #8
Chapter 10: I wanted to find words to describe the Odd era, but the only ones I found are MY DEATH. I'm in a serious case of addiction with this album and I have absolutely no idea when will my condition cease. I so in love with all the songs, the MV, the concept... And I feel so blessed to have seen them in those hairs (YES I SAW MINHO BLOND). I'll probably never stop listening to it. This album is on repeat the whole day and I already ordered my physical copy. I wish I could do more to support them T.T
DearDaisy #9
Chapter 10: Oh my gosh I'm in love with View! The music video creeped me out at first, but I got used to it xD The song was an instant favorite with me, though. I think it's been a while since I liked a SHINee title track quite as much after only one listen!
DearDaisy #10
Chapter 6: I started posting my entry! http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/956342