Chapter 1: Aww Short and sweet :)

Chapter 1: i'm sorry if this offends you in one way or another...
i felt like i'm reading something that came from a roleplay tbh lol

the flow of the story is good, and the plot is clearly written. besides the grammar and tenses, i think you can go a long way ahead ouo

Chapter 1: you take a request?
well, you know that Minho came to Jonghyun' Blue Night radio tonight. and when he left, Jong played Onew's moonlight.
from that moments, i do want to read a jongyu fic about what jjong would do after the show that relate to jongyu, like maybe he come to the dorm and stay there for the night, cuddling with Jinki, saying that he really wants to have jinki as the guest in his radio show.
could i have it from you, authornim?

Chapter 1: Aww that was cute..

If you want a prompt.. hmmm

I would like to request a jongyu fic where Jonghyun and onew met on a train to somewhere bec they ranaway from home (highschool au or anyyhing in the line of that)

^^

Chapter 1: thanks, i like it :> thought i'm sorry for you kitty... tu laa~ org suruh tolong kata mls skang tengok! JOBLESS!!! but it's ok, if you want to help me i don't mind. To much for my small hands to handle \(^_^)/