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♥ | Pinkie--- Jellyfish Entertainment Girl Group | Story Start! | ♥
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Pinkie
Jellyfish Entertainment
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■ cha hani 
plotline: main dancer, lead vocal, rapper
face claim: apink's naeun
love interest: vixx's hongbin
applicant: eyesmile-jiyu
application review
Jini: Hi! This is my character and her stage name will be "Haniel". I'll make my own application form so that it's not unfair to the applicants.

My App is here! 
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■ Lee Nami
plotline: Main Vocal & Lead Rapper
face claim: f(x)'s krystal
love interest: --
applicant: imikiii
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Miki: Sup guys, yeah, I've been having trouble with my
sleeping time lately, so I haven't been that active and been guilty of not updating some of our freaking fanfics. Jini will be in charge of this one :P I'm not that great in girl groups so meh ;3; <3 <3 <3

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■ wichai malee
plotline: triple threat
face claim: 9muses kyungri
love interest: BTS rap monster
applicant: missxox
application review
Jini: Hello our first applicant!!! Thanks for applying and I love Kyungri unni a lot so I'm happy you picked her as your face claim. Thanks for helping me about the reviews!!!! I appreciate it a lot! ^^

Overall, I like your app and it is very neat! I really liked her personality which is quite opposite to the expression she is showing on her face. I love that she is a caring unni to the members. Being confident is good as well! Oh my gosh, we found our gagwoman in Pinkie!!! Hahaha KyungKen!!!! Yeah RapMon oppa there haha! I liked how you explain his personaliy well... I can see that English is not your native language but it was so explained well! Or is it just me? I was impressed when she finally stood  up for herself because she's protective to people she loves but she needs and has a right to protect and love herself as well.

Your app was really done well and you explained things well and so you're accepted! Hwaiting!!!
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■ choi eunsol
plotline: triple threat
face claim: 9muses minha
love interest: bts jungkook
applicant: julietcheng
application review
Juliet unni!!! You love 100% Beat too? I love to listen to it a lot!!! Simjangi ttwinda! So glad you're here!

9muses members are the face claims of the first two! I love Yooyoungie my bias-eu! I love how you and Jungkook call each other! Choco and Kookie! Ah kwiyeowo!!!! Oh and I see the crazy trivia list haha! She has an australian accent! I like all the nicknames but Mother Choi was kind of weird since she would be the baby of the group so I wonder if you change to something suitable to her age... As usual, I love how you put titles in every section of the app! It was very good but I just want you fix one small thing! ^^ I really like it that your character is unique and it is the first time I had a Greece-Korean applicant!
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■ nam yoongi
plotline: main rapper and lead dancer
face claim: bestie's uji
love interest: vixx leo
applicant: fleetingpockets
application review
Hello unni/!!! WOW! Totally loved how you explained everything and your deep english adjectives and words! Wah Eric oppa's sister! Leo oppa is her love interest aigoo so cute! I enjoyed reading through everything and loved that you included a lot of scene request that we can work with and the suggestions are good! I love her defense mechanism when watching horror! Chic/Boyish for example is like SNSD's Mr. Mr because of the dance and the clothes. It can be the song as well.

I love the outfits you picked!!! The way you added gifs to the family and friends and you wrote the personalities well. OMO!! Leo oppa and Yoongi's interactions! I fell for the "Use Oppa" of Leo oppa! That is prety much realistic that the members will like and he would really say it if he started to like her or he is bothered by Yoongi's "Hyungnim"! That's all and well done!!! ^^ Ottokaji my girl gasumi kungkwang!~
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■ oh eunmi
plotline: main vocal 2 and rapper
face claim: girl's day minah
love interest: vixx N
applicant: slothempress
application review
Ahhhhhh my oppa! Thank you hahaha! ^ - ^ Your app was very simple but it was really daebak and really clear! Can I ask what is onesie? It's the first time I saw it and Zinger unni is a Main rapper so I hope you can choose someone who is a little weaker rapper like SNSD's Yoona unni or Sistar's Hyorin? Poor KenKen oppa always at the back-up two times already aigoo~ Someone save and pick Jaehwan oppa haha! 

I'm so happy that you picked Hakyeon oppa my brother!!! Precious Pretty Minah-ah suits your character so well! PENURTLE IS JUST CUTE!!! SO CUTE!!! She's really a little weird but she's cute! Loved your app so much and just fix the things I said and you're accepted!
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■ Jung jiyoung
plotline: vocalist and dancer
face claim: afterschool's lizzy
love interest: vixx leo
applicant: midnightrune
application review
Hi!!! So first, I love how she is straightforward and will never back-stab her friends. Being straightforward is totally much better than lying. Oh her poodle is named Leo same with Leo oppa? How cute! Leo oppa loves animals so he would really be close with Leo.... ???? Leo and Leo hahahahaha! You stage name is Foxy Fairy and I love it! Everyone can be an actress and it is not included in the triple threat because triple threat is composed of singing, dancing and rapping so just tell me if you want to be an actress.

Sorry but Afterschool's Lizzy is taken as a rapping twin by my cousin who is the co-author~ Please pick someone else. If you need help choosing, comment or message us and we'll be happy to help! Oh and I liked your scene requests! Crossdressing yes!!! I really want a hidden/secret camera scene! I suddenly want to dance Cattalena because of Riji unni!!
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■ jung taeksoo
plotline: main vocal 2 and rapper
face claim: miss a's suzy
love interest: vixx n
applicant: sakura19haruno95
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Hello! Suji-ah is your face claim yay! It's cute that Leo oppa calls you "Soo-yah". I love that she's like Leo oppa even though you two are half siblings only. Mianhae but VIXX' Voodoo Doll, Hyde, Eternity and Infinite's Last Romeo are taken by my character already so I have some to suggest for you. nobody has taken Rock your body or On and On yet! Also Be Mine or Paradise!

Wow thanks for picking Hakyeon oppa! I loved how you explain his personality which is how he really is. Yes, our overprotective brothers will be an obstacle but I think Hakyeon oppa would understand because he is an older brother as well ^^ Your stage name Lea made me smile because of the similarity with Taekwoon oppa's stage name. Should my stage name be H? Hahaha! Your requests made me say kyaa and Aigoo because of the cuteness! Wow scandal! Any scandal? Tell me what type of scandal then! ^^
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■ noh kyungmi
plotline: main vocal 2 and rapper
face claim: 9muses sungah
love interest: vixx ken
applicant: moonlightviolet
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Looks like you and KenKen oppa are meant to be!!! In the name of love came on when I started to write this! I was on soundcloud listening to VIXX songs while doing this!!! Kyaa so cute your personality is!!! I really love that she is very loving to the members and likes to hug them! She's so cute meddling into the members' lives. She would probably throw lots of questions at the guys! She is so sweet to update Pinkie's parents about the members!

Look Jaehwan oppa! Somebody finally saved you! He was always at the back-up's part aigoo~ OMO the interactions between Kyungmi and Ken oppa are so cute! Ken oppa wants to be back-hugged by Kyungmi! Thanks for the many song suggestions! You can fill the scene requests later or you can also contact us by pm or comment! I had no problem with your app and I can already imagine her hugging members! You're accepted!
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■ yoo taehye
plotline: Triple threat
face claim: snsd's taeyeon
love interest: exo kai
applicant: beautifulove
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Soolie! <3 Of course the beautiful leader-nim! Her nickname Little Fawn is very cute! I can already imagine her jumping like a kangaroo in the dorm!!! I love the personality short and clear! I understood everything in a short matter of time. Haha the "Kim Jongin" at the dislikes omg! Awwww she and Kai grew apart? ChanTaeKai? I could already picture Kai's face getting jealous! You should thank Sehun-ah hahaha!  Fallen Angel how beautiful the persona is! I am planning to keep Nicole unni plus Jiyoungie and Kris oppa is still in EXO since EXO are with him behind the "EXO angry at Kris" which is fake plan of SM. I think the government has to do something with it. I'm sure they have a law about abusing. I'll show you something later ne? You're accepted! There was nothing wrong!
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■ jin heeyeon
plotline: vocalist and dancer
face claim: snsd;s jessica
love interest: VIXX hyuk
applicant: jesstal
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Annyeong! First, I love Sica unni hehe~ First off, how did she become fluent in English if she was born in Seoul? Did she study it? And also mandarin~ Please explain how she learnt it! I love her polite and sweet! She gave her father's number hahahahaha! Ringa ringa ling!~

OH HYUKKIE MAKNAE! Oh so when VIXX congratulates her it'll be so awkward with Hyukkie! The graceful beauty joha! Utjima neo jaesu eobso utjima! I like Bestie's Thank you very much!!!  I know! I love all of VIXX songs too! There was no errors! You're accepted!
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plotline: plotline here
face claim: name here
love interest: name here
applicant: username
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face claim: name here
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applicant: username
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face claim: name here
love interest: name here
applicant: username
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fleetingpockets #1
Chapter 21: wEEPS DEBUT STAGE
"... you can hear their occasional panicky shriek" omg this made me giggle so hard
i can really imagine the girls doing it! <3
/as scatterbrained as their seniors eh? laughs/
the manager is so pretty! :o tbh i didn't expect it to be a girl
since usually, even the managers of girl groups are male, but welp. c;

ZE:A. APINK. EXO. VIXX. /chokes on air/
I CRI IF I WAS IN ONE SALON WITH THEM ID PROLLY HYPERVENTILATE ;;;;;;
awww, alice and jongin. i honestly feel bad. i wonder what happened? :c
xero and hani /side-eyes/ is this a love triangle i senseeeee? c;
and hongbin going all "no one touches my hani who are u dood let go of her" mode
sO FREAKING CUUUUUUUUTTTTTEEEEEEE!!!11!1!1!1!!! /squeals to the high heavens/
+ hAKYEON AND JAEHWAN STOP BEING CREEPS TO LEA AND KYUNGMI I CANNOT EVEN---
im surprised taekwoon didn't manhandle n or anything rofl teehee c;
++ nami being an adorable little sis and hERE COME THE LEES PPL THEY SWEG #justsaying

lol taekwoon no u are not funny at all what are u even doing iM---
wHY TELL IT TO WONSHIK OF ALL PPL /tho he's safer than hakyeon but still/
+ lea, hani and kyungmi unnie nO WHAT ARE U GUYS DOING ROFL
jongin sneaking the paper into alice's bag! /always a classic, bro wINK WONK/
weeps me want some bulgogi tooooooooo :'c
the older ones babying the others cRIES WHERE IS ERIC NAM WHEN U NEED HIM OTL
and no guys, hanbin is tHE BAE 5EVERRRR leave eunleo alone smh
kenmi is sAILING TOO OHOHOHOHO ICWUDT <3 <3 <3

they shared the stage with vixx for one perf? cRIES I GOT GOOSEBUMPS WHY EVEN IM---
/the partners tho rofl i see all the lovelines rAUGHS/ <3 <3 <3
but still
dEBUT STAGE /wEEPS AGAIN
Beautifulove
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Chapter 21: fhdjkcsdfnxckvcks this chapter was perf! i liked it a looooot
btw who's taeksoo and i liked how you made the exo x taehye interactions XD WAS CUTE!
PIXX HWAITING!
Sakura19Haruno95
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Chapter 21: Debut stage!!!! and the scene at the salon was sooo cute!!
fleetingpockets #4
Chapter 20: the first chapter! /squeals/
kyungmi is just so motherly, i adore her so much ; u ;
rofl at haniel saying that lea and kyungmi will be like n and leo
/whispers the cuter version tbvh/
i can really imagine the girls holding the camera and being noisy and stuff teehee
they're all so adorable i cannot-

vixx visiting them during practice!!11!1!! /insert 5-part harmony of hyuk shrieks/
the cha siblings are just too cuteeeee kyaaaaa~
+ i see u two judging wonshik rofl /waggles eyebrows/
lol at the leaders of the two groups pestering the jung siblings
and them talking just to fend the two off i srsly couldn't stop laughing! <3

hyukbin's short domination over the camera for pinkie tv teehee /shakes head/
kyungmi's watching over you boys beware rofl
aaaaaaaaaaand hANBIN SOBS WAILS CLAWS AT HEART why are u so adorbs lemme squish u both ; u ; <3 <3 <3
/hakyeon stop being a bodyguard pls rofl/
"eun and leo were sitting beside each other and were really awkward" /pukes rainbows/ nope nope nOPE
and kenmi interactions!!!!111!!1!! /sobs ken stahp kyungmi is flustered/
+ hakyeon doing the moves towards lea (without taekwoon knowing(!!!)) and hani seeing it! <3
/i see what u did there oppar i've got my eyes on you puahaahah/

just--
the first chappie. gOLD.
GOLD, I TELL YOU. /sobs/
<3 <3 <3
Sakura19Haruno95
#5
Chapter 20: OH MY GOD!!!! This was sooooo cute!!!!
Beautifulove
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Chapter 20: YAY FOR THE FIRST CHAPPIE <3 It's soooo nice
even the words are in pink XDDD
Beautifulove
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Chapter 19: kdfjgcvdkcj I love the whole album~!
it's so perf XD
can't wait for some interactions!
fleetingpockets #8
Chapter 19: :o omg the tracklist im--- /sobs hearts all over/
i love how there's a mix of genres in the mini-album! <3
/is the love letter female version a cover or just an edited version omg it's awesome hOW/
+ debut album and already a collab with vixx weeps ; u ;

and the mv asdfghjkl;;
no words. no more.
/cries i just adore everything/ <3 <3 <3
Sakura19Haruno95
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Chapter 18: I'm totally exited for the story!! And I just want to point out something, it's not a huge deal but Taeksoo/Lea's persona is not Baby Lion, but Momma Lion xD
fleetingpockets #10
Chapter 18: official profiles! squeeee <3
maknae-liners look so cute i cannot even-- /sobs/
+ the unnie-liners look young for their ages tbvh
i love how their personas aren't all cutesy even though their starting concept is fairy-like ; u ;
it just really shows how diverse each member is <3
i wonder how they'd interact with each other? :)))
excited for the first chapter! pinkie hwaiting! <3