As The World Falls Down

Description

 
This is a short songfic about daragon love. The song is from The movie "the labyrinth" and David Bowie sang it. It's kinda old so not a lot of people can recognize it :D

Foreword

Author's Notes: (I'm too lazy to make a new author's note for asian fanfic, I just copied the one I made for another forum...kekeke)

This is my first fanfic. I have always wanted to write a fanfic about love but I never got around to it because I felt I lacked the skill to do it, I felt I was being too arrogant and presumptuous about love since I have never been in love nor have I ever been in a relationship, and I was too shy to ever show my work to anybody for scrutiny and inputs. I think that one of the biggest hurdles I have to my fanfic writing is that I am used to writing essays, hence the lack of dialogue in this fanfic. It is such a challenge for me to incorporate dialogues in my writing, it feels so unnatural to me but I hope to overcome that and write a better version of this or another story, once I get the hang of fanfic writing. I honestly need a lot of help with learning how to write stories especially things regarding the build up of a plot and incorporating dialogues. If you guys, can gimme pointers about this, I would really appreciate it. Thank you so much for sparing some of your time to read this short songfic.

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hongbin2 #1
I was like 'wait, I know this guy'
jadedyume #2
Thank you, ItssCheska..i hope this couple is true too kekeke:D
ItssCheska #3
Wooo! This is great! I really think ( and hope ) that this story is true! ^^
jadedyume #4
@cchase1302 *hides under a pillow and blushes* thank you so much for the compliment...it really helps motivate me to do better...thank you for making an effort to encourage me ^______^
chhase1302
#5
I was interested in this fic because lots of my favorite writers comment on it *coughcoughjennilynukinarijcoughcough* lol this fic is really done well! I love your high-class vocabulary and how you play with words. Looking forward to read more of your fics! <3
jadedyume #6
waaaa~ you read it...thanks a lot for reading and for leaving a feedback...thank you, saranghaejj08...i really want to improve and write better stories especially yunjae stories hehehe :D
Saranghaejj08
#7
Wow. That was beautiful. Such powerful emotions and amazing feelings. I'm not really a Daragon shipper, but this was amazing! Please write more! :)
jadedyume #8
@_yen_yen_ thank you~ weeeee~ you guys are really nice :D it's nice to know that i'm not the lone newbie around here...let's work hard! you and me, fighting!
happyenyen #9
This one is actually GOOD! Yay! <br />
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You're not alone girl. I'm also kinda new to this writing stuff, writing fanfics, I mean.
jadedyume #10
@2bella2resist thank you so much for the encouragement ^_______^ i read your fic, i loved it! I'm now a fan..i'm a noob but i'll work harder to be better..to us, fighting~ :D