The Sinking of Lead

Description

Kyungsoo's been living with two mechanical hands since forever.  Jongin's been way too mad since forever.  With the help of each other, they begin to understand that forever is as long as you want it to be.

Foreword

This fic is written for t h e f e e l s • a writing contest, using this image prompt.

This fic is written with intentional run-on sentences, comma splices, and occasional grammar defying rules to mirror the tone in the story, so please take it with a grain of salt.

A great big thank you to Kim (KimAiko/yuniquekimchi) for reviewing this story and fixing my occasional tense mix-ups<3

The title is inspired by Samuel T. Coleridge's "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner".

"O happy living things! no tongue
Their beauty might declare:
A spring of love gushed from my heart,
And I blessed them unaware:
Sure my kind saint took pity on me,
And I blessed them unaware.

The selfsame moment I could pray;
And from my neck so free
The Albatross fell off, and sank
Like lead into the sea."

 

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aegyoJellyprincess #1
Chapter 2: i'll still be waiting for this story :)
marshmallowduizhang
#2
Annyeong~
I was wondering if you'd like to enter this into my Kaisoo writing competition~
Here's the link if you're interested:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/829649/
lissamary
#3
I'm looking forward to the story :)