secrets in the lips

Description

it starts with 'once upon a time' but will the ending be 'happily ever after' ?

Foreword

hello every one..this is another fanfic from me dedicated to my beloved friend/ yeobo/bestie romanceaddict.~~

she wanted me to write a fic with heechul and zhoumi, so i wrote one for her..:D

so, about the story..i completed the fiction before posting it because i think it'would have been kinda confusing if i didn't. the tag says heechul, but the first 3 chaps might not exactly have his name on it..so you have to read the whole fic to know the story..

hope you guys enjoy the story and comments are loved.

i'll love you more if you subscribe...:D

p/s: sorry if there is grammatical or spelling errors..:)

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yesungxbiased #1 Apr 6, 2013 00:15:59

Chapter 5: Awwwww!!!!!!! That was so sweet!!!!! <3

sweet_emy #2 Jan 19, 2013 18:26:43

Chapter 5: waaaw !!!! finely tonight i read something different , great job and great story , really like it soo much <3

bonchan #3 Oct 13, 2012 06:57:18

Chapter 5: this is nice story ^^. Heemi is a rare pairing. But in the real life they're quite close to each other ^^

tsundere_zen #4 Nov 11, 2011 18:00:34

In my opinion, this story is definitely the most unique one in your collection yeobo! I wish i can think as creatively as this! ^^

-Angela-Zhang- #5 Sep 11, 2011 14:56:17

I also love your banner ^^

-Angela-Zhang- #6 Sep 11, 2011 14:55:59

Chap 5- Hopefully Zhou Mi wil reunite with his family one day! Good thing for Hankyung ^^ 
 
I loved this ^^ The interactions between Heechul and Zhou Mi at the end were so sweet :) 
Your writing has definitely improved- this was arresting and well written ^^ Barely any grammatical mistakes, actually ^_^ There's a distinct style in this piece, and I'll definitely be coming back to re-read!! :D

-Angela-Zhang- #7 Sep 11, 2011 14:50:38

Chap 4- 
"He felt jealous of himself. Does that make sense?" 
It actually really makes sense! ^^ I thought this point was a very perceptive detailed idea :) 
Yay! Zhouchul! or HeeMi! or...I don't know their "pair" name... ^^' 
I'm glad that Leeteuk won't force them to marry if they don't "love" each other ^^ But I don't think Heechul's dad will feel the same way...? 
This idea is actually an awesome example of "love knows no gender". Zhou Mi wa attracted to Heechul even when he thought he was a girl, and still loves him when his "manliness" is revealed. <3

-Angela-Zhang- #8 Sep 11, 2011 14:43:20

Chap 3- !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
I was practically leaping up from my chair!! Heechul is Eunhee!! YAY! ^^ 
I love the simultaneous confessions at the end, espescially the "I'm not a girl" from Heechul XD 
Well, since Zhou Mi and Heechul seem to have already fallen in love with each other, they can get married...? Problem solved! :) (somehow I don't think it'll be that simple...) 
Poor Heechul...hopefully Zhou Mi can feel the void in his heart that comes from being unloved...

-Angela-Zhang- #9 Sep 11, 2011 14:38:03

Chap 2 .....!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sorry^^"* Is EunHEE HEEchul, by chance??!!! ^__________^ I sure hope so!!! 
Oh, Heechul in a dress and high heels ^_^ How cute! No wonder Zhou Mi is feeling so attracted to "her" ^^ 
"The sun rays reflected on her skin and it made her look like a goddess." 
That's brilliant! Heechul looks like a goddess in Zhou Mi's eyes...<3 :)

-Angela-Zhang- #10 Sep 11, 2011 14:27:14

Chap 1- Right of the bat, I love how this started ^^ I'm assuming that the little boy who doesn't like princesses at the beginning is Zhou Mi? I love how you introduced his interest in men, rather than in women ^^ It was just so...strikingly relevant ^_^ 
"Zhoumi smiled he saw Kyuhyun, one of his younger brother bullying Shindong who was 5 years elder than him. He was spraying water with the water hose which the gardener was using to water the plants, while Shindong desperately tries to carry his plump body and run away. He was failing miserably." 
OHOHO! Poor Shindong XD I find that writers like to bully him, in general XD and apparently...so does "evil Kyuhyun" XD XD 
Oh no!!! :O Zhou Mi's going to have an arranged marriage!! But he doesn't like women...:( poor thing...maybe *Heechul* will come into play...? :D