Melted

Description

Two different souls, one cold winter day.

And a book.

Foreword

Just a simple and short one shot that came into mind a few days back. Hope you guys liked it (-:

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cece_mytlover #1
Chapter 1: you should make a story out of it :) it's good!
Maayana #2
Chapter 1: I love ittttt!! Please continue you writing is amazing! :D
blueandgrey_ #3
Chapter 1: Wow, this was really really good. Your descriptions were excellent, I love how you described the weather and the expressions you used for simple things that made them sound so much better. The way you wrote about the girl's feelings was amazing as well. A job well done, definitely! :)
I think you should leave it here, I feel that it ended on an open end, but it still ended sweetly, but even if you continue it, I'm sure it would be great! <3
smhh9837 #4
Chapter 1: This is amazingly beautiful!!! Please continue!!!
tunamakmak #5
Chapter 1: Hi! I hope you'll continue with the story.... it seems beautiful :))
MintySHINeeBoutique #6
Chapter 1: PLEASEEEE CONTINUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
-Onyuu #7
Chapter 1: OMFG — Friggin' butterflies in my stomach when he introduced himself on a piece of paper, I . . . Asdfghjkl, please do continue it into a story! Please please please! /rolls on the floor because feels.
patbingsoo #8
Chapter 1: You shall go for the story!!! :D
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