Chapter 1: god i love your writing so much! I miss you <3 come back to us!!

Chapter 1: Jskdjddjdjdjdjrjd why why why why whyyyyyyyyyy omg >.< author-nim you have ne in tears right now ㅠㅠ why do you do this to me omgggg Poor Youngjae ;-; omg this is why I don't angst Dx but damn was this awesome! I love your idea of the whole seeing of colors when you see your soulmate thing. That's really cool~~
This was really great<3

Chapter 1: IM CRYING SO MUCH AT THIS!!!!! can there please be a sequal???

Chapter 1: Omg i didnt suspect that. Omg the tears..... ;A;

Chapter 1: Ohhhhhh my poor baby Zelo

Chapter 1: This is my first time seeing a story using this prompt, and I definitely wasn't expecting a story like this. That being said, towards the end, I just felt so sad...I almost feel guilty for all the angst I used to write lol. But I think you did just the right amount of hope because it was there and yet...it relieved some of my sadness though I still had a bad feeling. I actually really enjoyed this story a lot!

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Chapter 1: Omg.. I'm crying at work! ... Omg... :'(

Chapter 1: asrjfneosmfrngn I died.
I usually avoid angst. Angst makes me go all sad. But because you wrote it I read it.
At least there was a flicker of hope at the end, which is preventing me to go and curl up in a corner... lol But still... definitely pouting right now (no matter how unbecoming this is for my age!)

I really really like the way you portray Youngjae and Zelo~ There so cute together and just make the perfect couple! I'm squealing every time I read your stuff haha I found the concept of seeing the world in color when meeting your soulmate terribly romantic. But Yongguk is right soulmate does not always equate love at first sight and the fact that Zelo could still be considered a child could be problematic. I imagine, that even if he did survive and the two entered a relationship, things would still be a little complicated. Love is not a peaceful and tranquil path haha

As usual, excellently written and pleasantly paced! Please keep up the good work, I really enjoy your works (I admit i do not read the fics without Zelo... I'm so sorry... I just cannot...) and your writing style! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Things you can do better next time?...


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... Have Zelo in a wedding dress. On Youngjae's arm. Or maybe Daehyun's lol

Chapter 1: first time angst... are you kidding me.. I'm sobbing in my damn corner... what the heck... lol this I'm speechless.. I didn't expect this to happen... I was more like oh crap Zelo must have fallen out of love or something.. but noo he ugh... ='/ TEARS

--Good Job =]
You got me riled up =]