Chapter 1: So cute!
Love everything about this fanfic!
Kinda want a sequal...

Chapter 1: I need a sequel of this kkkkk~ oh, how much I love Onew when he is on selfish mode(?) <3

Chapter 1: aakkk...
my OnKey feel..
it seems so real. I love it.
haha.. Jjong. :D

Chapter 1: Aigooo.. So cute. Feel like dying. Haha. This is so good. Pls write more onkey. I miss them

Chapter 1: waaaaah WHY?! WHY?! Why you make me feel this way authornim?? oh my onkey feels...

good job, thank you.

Chapter 1: YA ALLAH AIIIIIIIIII ;AAA;
FF MACAM APA INIIIIIII !!! BIKIN NYESEK (?) DIAWAL TAPI ASIK DI AKHIR *jedotin kepala ke tembok* hahahahahahahaha

ini tuh semacam prequel ff mu sebelum nya yaaa (aku sih baca nya gitu). Yang jinki mau ke hutan itu lohh.. Jinki macem bales dendam ga bangunin Kibum pas dia mau berangkat ke brazil. Soalnya jinki juga ga dikasih tau Kibum mau berangkat ke Macau haahaha.. *eh btw kibum ke Macau dulu apa Jinki ke Brazil dulu yahh? Mendadak lupa*

Karakter Taemin disini dewasa banget yaaa... >< anak papah mamah sudah besar sekarang #lah

OIYA JONGHYUN LUCKY BENERRRRRR.. BISA NGE-GEP ONKEP CIPOKAN DUHHHHH *SAYAT-SAYAT NADI*

Thank you ai.. you made my day.. thanks for sharing this story.. hewhew im into this story.. seems sooooo real! ;_; about jinki's jealous feeling... uughh! Are you stole kibum's diary or what? Perasaan kayak nyata bgt ai cerita mu.. Kayak di imajinasi ku juga. Tepat sasaran lah. *ngomong apa sih gua*

Aaacckkkk ada epep baluuuuu :3

Baca dulu ahh hihi

Chapter 1: OH.MY.GOD YOU KNOW THIS IS MORE THAN AWESOME
felt sooooooo real oh my X'''''D
the ending make me asdfghjkl XD
and fyi yagi kibum is the bottom one(?) khewkhew
great work author-nim~ b

Chapter 1: Thank you author-nim !! I really love it, it felt real !! I love how Jonghyun reacted when he saw Jinki and Kibum kissing xDDDD HAHAHAHA. Great Job Author-nim ! Write more Onkey please ^_____^

Chapter 1: Awesome, I loved it, everything felt really real ^^ liked the ending too, I thought it would be angsty throughout haha :)