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The Heirs and The Idols; Jeguk vs. Kirin || Apply Open!
 
Kim Hye Rin
 
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Heir Or Idol. Idol
FACE CLAIM. Yurim
backup FACE CLAIM. -
LOVE INTEREST. Kim Jongdae
status. Chosen

My character! All pictures will be hyperlinked to the person's application. 

Choi Haneul
 
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heir or idol. heir
FACE CLAIM. Kim Seuk Hye
backup FACE CLAIM. Park Hwan hui
LOVE INTEREST. Do Kyungsoo
applicant. mirilemonster
date submitted. 04/22/2014
status. accepted

Hi, Miri! All in all, I liked your app and found no mistakes in it, which is good! The Jeguk wanting to be in Kirin was interesting and I didn't expect that and I quite like the idea of that, especially with Hana's younger brother being in Got7, another unexpectation from me. I just want to ask if you could specify what her family's company is targeted to, since the subject of science has a wide variety. Thank you for applying~

Kim Hyun Ki
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. IDOL
FACE CLAIM. Kim Gun
backup FACE CLAIM. Park Ji ho
LOVE INTEREST. NC.A
applicant. xxxrei_yuyaxxx
date submitted. 04/22/2014
status. pending

Hi Rei! You brought the twins back, yay~ Anywhoo, your application was pretty okay most of the time, it's just the font of the app being changed kind of bothered me, it's okay if you don't fix it, just thought to point that out. The personality was okay, I just want to ask you to elaborate/add more on his negative side since there's not much. 

Kim Hyun Ok
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. IDOL
FACE CLAIM. Byeon so eun
backup FACE CLAIM. Jang Hae Byeol
LOVE INTEREST. Choi Young do
applicant. xxxrei_yuyaxxx
date submitted. 04/22/1024
status. Accepted

Nothing majorly wrong with this app, overall I found no problems with it so this one's good to go! Thank you for applying~

Nam Miyoung
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. heir
FACE CLAIM.  lee Sungkyung
backup FACE CLAIM. eun gyeong
LOVE INTEREST. mark tuan
applicant. chosunhee
date submitted. 04/23/2014
status. accepted

Hello Sun! Your application was good overrall, I found no problems with it. I love your faceclaim, she's gorgeous! Thank you for applying!

Zhang Xiyin
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. Heir
FACE CLAIM. ne rou
backup FACE CLAIM. baek sumin
LOVE INTEREST. Oh sehun
applicant. kaikhione
date submitted. 04/25/2014
status. accepted

Hi Nepenthe (what a pretty name T.T) One thing to point out, for the social class it's meant to either be 1, 2 or 3, deriving from the drama 'Heirs'. That's really all you need to fix and then you're accepted. Also your character has a looot of nicknames, if I were to ever put her in the story, I may not use most of them, just wanted to point that out. Thank you for your application!

Im Haeun
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. Idol
FACE CLAIM. kim su jin
backup FACE CLAIM. kim seulmi
LOVE INTEREST. byun baekhyun
applicant. jinheesnap92
date submitted. 04/25/2014
status. accepted

Hey Jinhee! Whoa our characters are alike in someways, that's crazy, haha. Nothing wrong with your app, just want to ask you to add more negativity to her personality, but that's it. Thank you for applying!

Cha Eun Sol
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. heir
FACE CLAIM. Kim Jae Kyung
backup FACE CLAIM. zinger
LOVE INTEREST. min soo gi
applicant. --panoramic
date submitted. 04/29/2014
status. pending

Hey Tevi~ Jae Kyung is gorgeous, I can't. She's even more gorgeous irl, which I got to experience T.T Anyways, your app was great overall and this is the case for most of the apps I've gotten; just add more negativity to her personality.

Andi Lee
 
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HEIR OR IDOL. Idol
FACE CLAIM. kite
backup FACE CLAIM. yonghee
LOVE INTEREST. Kim Jongin
applicant. fayt16
date submitted. 05/02/2014
status. accepted

Hi Steph! I love your character, the faceclaim, personality- everything. One thing to point out; Kris can't be your rival because he's going to be an Idol in the story and even though I really liked the idea of him being a chaebol I can't incorporate that in T-T. After fixing this, you'll be good to go~ Thank you for applying!

 

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Rei_24
#1
Chapter 2: I just finished fixing Hyun Ki but I atill think it not good. If I still need to add more please tell me so I can get that out of the way
rubyprincess99
#2
Going to apply soon. I have a question can u be an heir and have a idol cousin?
-kimbab
#3
Love the teaser and I added some stuff to my personality:P
silver-linings
#4
Chapter 3: forgot to tell you, i already fixed my app!
eomonim
#5
Chapter 2: fixed the social class and lessened the nicknames ^^
fayt16
#6
Chapter 2: I fixed my app
Thanks again for the review! ^^