Chapter 1: Mari, It’s so wonderful!!
Your description of the room and the sensory deprivation made Taemin’s appreciation of/need for the colour and Jinki’s singing so poignant.
I love how Jinki finds a way to be “chipper” even in this situation – that suits his personality so well.
Minho is so supportive and understanding, and he shows such persistence, not giving up on getting Taemin out even after all those months.
Mysterious and efficient Jonghyun was wonderful, with his black attire and tattoo. And, “So good with her hands.” lmao. Of course Jonghyun would be like that.
Taemin’s meeting with Jinki. “The swing on the porch slowed” – Jinki knows his voice, and he knows this is Taemin right away. And the way he touches Taemin’s face and “sees” Taemin with his fingertips. It’s so heart-warming. Beautiful job, Mari.
And my vote is obviously YES! If you’re inspired to write more, I would love to read it.
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