Pressure

Description

Pressure is the monster that keeps Jiyong awake at night. Youngbae is the one who keeps the monster at bay and allows Jiyong to let go.

Foreword

This is all entirely true. The stress part, anyway, which prompted me to write this, especially since GD can probably understand this feeling better than anyone. This is what you have to look forward to when you go to college *sigh*.

My first non-AU story on AFF (I've got a healthy mix of Alternate Universe!GDYB and real-life!GDYB in mind ;D), so please enjoy! And take this as a peace offering for me not updating "Let's Make This Last Year Count" lately. That probably won't happen until my final projects are done a couple of weeks from now, and I apologize. But please enjoy this little bit of fluff! <3

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PhoenixDelight #1
Chapter 1: I usually don't read stories with 1st person's POV, but this is so nicely written, I enjoy reading it. :) I like how Youngbae taking care of Jiyong, he's really sweet. Thank you for this. ^^
ChaeLi-yah #2
Chapter 1: they are friends here, aren't they? ^-^
wise_duck #3
Chapter 1: wow so skillfully written! no awkwardness :) and gdyb are so cute here <3
Lunia-chan #4
Chapter 1: I... can't describe in words how perfect your storys are. I've read the dragon's kiss and it was as perfect as this. The way you use words... It just makes the story perfect. You don't describe the room so much, but I can imagine it perfectly. And it's good that there are not too much dialogues. The feeling your writing gives me is gorgeous. You don't use too many words nor too few. I can't describe it. It's just perfect. You really have talent. And a new subscriber ;)
aka_chan #5
Chapter 1: oh my god.....this was so incredibly perfect. thank you. really, thank you. this was just the read I needed. you're incredible. I felt this so strongly. absolutely beautiful piece.
youngbeezzys #6
Chapter 1: ohmygod. this is superb :')))) please make more gdyb!! u're a great writer tbh!
Hatsumomo #7
Chapter 1: You have proven again what an amazing author you are. Just... wonderful! Wow! I love how you show us
two different sides of the word 'pressure' here. I mean the pressure that Jiyong feels in the beginning is equal with stress and burden and is therefore negative. However, this type of pressure is cured by another type of pressure, positive pressure so to speak: Youngbae's warm body pressing against his own. Now, the way you portrayed and combine those two types of pressure is simply brilliant..! I love your language! You describe everything so precisely and yet you never use a word too much or less. GDYB are so mature here, which makes your story sound so realistic. There is no overuse of fluff (that is something that can make a story very artificial imo) You keep calm but still feed us with enough GDYB love to swoon over.

t-oresama you are a fantastic writer! I truly enjoy your work ! :)
taku_makoto #8
Chapter 1: sooo cute. Love it!
MyLactobacillus #9
Chapter 1: I love this kind of story...fluffy and sweet GDYB~~♥
Thank you so much~~ !!
agree, can you make more GDYB for us?
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