The Bishop

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   "Forgive me Father, for I have sinned," the old priest said, kneeling on frail knees. He looked into the young man's eyes, begging for his mercy, for God above's. Time was running out. A boy watched the entire episode, concealed in the shadows.

   "My child, tell me your wrongdoings." The young man said, kneeling down to touch the piest's balding head. He, too, was wearing a cassock. It was 12 AM, and the church was closed down for the night.

   The old man smiled softly, coughing on his own blood, revealing grotesquely red teeth. "Wrongdoings?" he repeated. "I have let the devil in the house of God. His temple. My body. I have sinned, Father."

   "God has shined his divine light on you, made you repent. Through his eternal guidance, I cast your sin away from your soul. My child, God forgives you."

   The young man stood up. He pulled out a silver gun from inside his robes. The old man just kneeled there, somehow looking as if he anticipated this. "May the Blessed Lord above guide you to the right path to his Divine Son."

   He cocked his gun. "In the name of the Father." He steadied the weapon. "And of the Son." He aimed at the old man's head. "And of the Holy Spirit." He pulled the trigger.

   "Amen."

   The priest's body collapsed on the marble floor, his weight collapsing. 

   The hidden boy emerged slowly, fearfully. "W-what did you do to him?" he whispered loud enough for the young man to hear.

   "I simply cast away the devil in his body," he answered bluntly. He stowed away the weapon he had, clutching a silver rosary in its stead.

   "You-- Who are you?" the young man said, petrified beneath the pillar.

   The man simply walked towards him. His gait was calm and serene, as if he hadn't murdered an old priest about a minute ago.

   "I'm the Bishop."

Foreword

huehue hallo thar i see u found this

OK OMG IM SORRY IF THE FOLLOWING CHAPPIES CREEP YU OUT OK JUST READ ON

wow ok i started another fic when i still havent updated my previous one lmao im such a responsible author amnt i lol ok you can comment on who you think is who, why did "the bishop" kill that priest and basically what you just think... :--) if these all confused you, you should just read on huehue kyahat ahaing ok see you mwa ilya :***

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yay i updated! thank you for reading and subscribing, and i hope you all enjoy the first chap! ^^

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chainedearth #1
Chapter 2: This seems really promising T^T Will you still be continuing this?
megadamant #2
Chapter 2: I sincerely, not-so-secretly and not-so-silently-either hoping that you will still update this story even though it's been almost two years. :( I really like all your ideas and also your writing style.
whimsicow
#3
Chapter 2: WHY DIDNT I SEE THOS EARLIERRRR

okay
I love chen and xiumin qsdfjglgl they're just so <3 HNNGSS i really like them. luhan amused me so much, from his throughts to his actions. poor him, if I went there, i'd probably die within a couple of seconds.

yixing cries perf he's the perf combo i swear good thing dumbhan has him so he can coax him out of his shell

i'm anticipating the relation between Sehun's murder-psychological-issues and Luhan oh m god he's a psych teacher wow i woooowww i see what you're doing
Dark50
#4
Chapter 1: Oh . I've found another hidden gem <3 yahh Sehun be a serial killer! Go go
-duijong
#5
Chapter 1: Im a hundred percent sure im already in love with this story.
It's very well written and perfectly detailed, especially when you described that church scene.
It sent chill down my spine, kudos to you!
I also love how you didn't introduce Sehun's name until the end of the chapter. It really made me gasp and crave for more.
Thank you so much for the update, and I do hope you keep up the good work for chapylters to come!~^^
whimsicow
#6
Chapter 1: holy

the title and summary intrigued me and although I don't like religious

what the i'm like shaking at the genius of this i can
the way Sehun's mother was killed and his facial expression oh my god you wrote it so good I'm just. wow. probably one of my favorite hunhan horror fics now.

i am really anticipating this and curious as to how Sehun's going to murder and etc. and how it ties with Luhan and oh my god just. and the reigious flows in so well just wjahajsbsb ;-; i'm spazzing at this sobs
-duijong
#7
This sounds so epic ;--;
Update soon!